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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from DarthTenebrus
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Kept well in suspense...but there should have been more to this. It was good to see Haldir brought in for this; the March Warden of Lothlorien would be a most welcome ally against the Hellmouth. You know, it strikes me as fitting that I envisioned Haldir wearing a suit and tie with a longcoat; that would go well with his mannerism and his appearance, while Legolas would fit into this modern, shall I term it thus, 5th Age wearing a polo shirt and khakis...

Oh. As for firearms, if they no longer had access to their swords and their bows and arrows, would an Elf prefer a rifle, a submachine gun, or a pistol?

Ok I'm done rambling; good story, just hated to see it end here with so much left over.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [13 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from purrfus
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Sweet.

I knew going into this there were only 10 chapters so I'm not sure why the end came as such a surprise.

I have to go check out the other stories to see what happened.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from purrfus
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Purple or gold Trance? I think I might have to check out the other stories.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from purrfus
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Now multiple elves. Hmmmmmm.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Before the Dawn" from purrfus
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Wandering around looking for something different, and end up here.

It definitely starts with a bang.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Before the Dawn" from LadyCarpathian
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Ohhh!!!! Elf Smoochies!!! More! More!! MORE!!!!! And do I see possible Buffy/Haldir action coming???? Then again, I did see Buffy/Spike hints. So does that mean that our other favorite elf is going to save Dawnie????? We Must KNOW!!

And Why hasn't this been updated since Aug of 03?????!!!!!!
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [11 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I love this! It is so awesome! I feel bad for Buffy, she needs someone to love. Maybe Spike will get better? Or Angel will show up? Well whatever happens I'm sure will be great! I love this pairing. Willow and Legolas make the world's cutest X-over couple. I think this has to be one of the best Willow/Legolas fic I've read, and I've read many! Well, I can't wait for more!
~Alana
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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AWwwwwwwwwwwww, thats so sweet/cute, great chapter!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Haldir saves the day! Another 10. Good mechanics, good stylistics. Yay!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh wow, I *loved* that chapter! Especially your thoughts about Xander and his worries - very sweet and a nice exploration of his character. The idea of Dawn being tempted by the ring - quite unique. I always thought that the ring would single Willow out as well, but it would actually be quite interesting to see what would happen to Dawn if she were to put the ring on, being energy and everything. Anyways, I've got my fingers crossed for Legolas. Every time I read another chapter I keep wanting to send him a get well soon card or flowers or something ;) Keep up the wonderful work!

DeppsDarling xx
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [27 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Loving the character exploration! Always nice to know what they're thinking, and you seem to have captured their personalities very nicely indeed.

Haldir soon? Love Haldir. Need Haldir. Lots n' lots of Haldir.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Love the story! Great plot! Looking forward to more!!!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [20 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Loving this story! Interesting how you've tied together Angel and Andromeda too, really fun. I'm usually conservative with my ratings, and would have given this a 9 like I gave Always Darkest, but you've got Haldir in this one, so it gets a 10.

Your characterizations are spot-on, good job!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [20 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Okay, loving it, loving it, loving it! Very well written and a great idea! I can't wait to see what happens next :) More soon... please? This is a wonderful story, well done!

DeppsDarling x
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Before the Dawn" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Love It!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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