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Four Fantastically Gifted Scoobies

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Review of chapter "Pointy sticks??!!" from Dragonelf
Review:
Great story so far and I hope you will find inspiration to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pointy sticks??!!" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on this so far, please do your best to add more chapters soon
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where are we this time?" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting story so far, please add your next chapter as soon as you are able to
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where are we this time?" from cjdunk
Review:
Don't stake Ben. He is a teddy bear.
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where are we this time?" from Obsidian
Review:
Good start so far. Wish the chapters where longer but it's upto you.

Keep it going I can't wait to see what happenes next.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where are we this time?" from NoLifeKing
Review:
It's getting better, imho. ;-)
I look forward for what will happen next.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're going on a witch hunt!" from NoLifeKing
Review:
The 4 people, you will be using, are interesting. It's just slightly confusing, how the four of them got together to disappear. :-/
Nevertheless, I look forward for what will happen to Xander, Amy, Dawn and Oz. :-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [24 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're going on a witch hunt!" from DanaShort
Review:
Like the story.

Confused by the formating though.

Nerver seen a disclaimer in the middle of a story, and the * at the begening and end while supposedly signaling a flashback, didn't work for me - I stared at it for a while wondering what it might mean, then remembered it was bracketing the flashback, but the other one was so far away, it wasn't easy to follow, at least not for me.

Finally, where did Dawn come from in the scene? You have Michael(Who's that, BTW?), Amy, Buffy, and Willow tied to a bonfire, then a few seconds later, Xander, Dawn, Amy and Oz vanishing in a cloud of smoke. How'd Amy get free? I was left confused, very confused - like several paragraphs were missing.
Review By [DanaShort] • Date [23 May 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prolouge; a spurned man" from banner
Review:
This could be good...
Review By [banner] • Date [23 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolouge; a spurned man" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Interesting start - I definitely want to see more
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [22 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prolouge; a spurned man" from Greywizard
Review:
An interesting start you've got here. I'd like to see more soon.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 May 06] • Not Rated
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