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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Traveler
Review:
Its now 2011 which newly defines updating soon. I reread you stories several times a year just because I enjoy the way you have written them. I hope real life and the desire to write combine to allow you to update if not all and least most of your stories. Thanks again for sharing with us.
Comments from author:
Yes I know. Of all my outstanding stories the next part of this one is the closest to being ready to post. Having said that it does not look like I will be finishing it yet.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [23 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from payday
Review:
Everything going on is so original, I've never seen one done like this. I like it. The hate the council and it sucks that a lot of them got to live. Richard is ok because he still loves his family but at the same time I can see him going against them if he has to. Yes lorelai can be impulsive but she does the right things and I agree with her most of the time. With Richard he just sees her as the old lorelai who was goofy and acted crazy he doesn't see into her mind and sees that she knows her responsibilities as Mother of the Slayers. I liked her at the meeting even though Richard was annoyed with her. I wouldn't of signed anything by them whether or not anybody agrees with it. Haven't they learned by now that evil double crosses them or finds/puts a loophole in there. I say that was stupid on there part and I can't believe Lorelai and Buffy agreed with it.

I can't wait to see who the people that gets sent to lorelai are and how she unites all the slayers. It'll be a better place for the world but hopefully they unite against some of the councils policies not against the council well unless they have to cause that would end bad. But to get more say in how things are run because who are these people that think they know best and always try to control the slayers and everything else. I'm glad you got a new Beta and hopefully a new chapter will come out :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

Richard is in a very awkward position, he wants the best for his family but also has the problem of helping to fight a war. Think of him as a General, the good ones what to look after their people but if they have to they know they will order them into a position that could get them killed!

As for the Council, in this story I envision them as a direct counter to Wolfram and Hart, so as with W&H at the end of Angel season four they came back bigger and stronger than before they were destroyed. - I wonder how the writers on Angel would have explained that in season six if they, W&H, were not there?
Review By [payday] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I very much enjoyed reading both Life Savers series! If the author would only manage to finish the story, us readers would be on cloud 9!! So, please, author, please finish?
Comments from author:
I cannot actually promise to finish this story but I can promise an update very soon.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from zigpal
Review:
great update. Poor stupid demons picking a fight with Slayers after their meeting. I can't wait to see what Oz is going to bring to the table.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have no idea what Oz will bring to Stars Hollow but I know it will not be babbling lol. No his ability to control his wolf will help Lorelai get more control over things.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from carmsfic
Review:
AMAZING STORY! I loved Life Saver I and II. Please please post more. Please please please?
Comments from author:
Thanks. I am trying. I just have other things to do at the moment.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [23 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DevJannz
Review:
Cool story so far. I read the first part as well. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have managed to get quite a bit of the next part written so hopefully not to long await.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [16 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from melissouza
Review:
I have re-read both this and original story probably 4-5 times & it doesn't get old. I hope you haven't abandoned the story b/c I think there are some really good plot lines developing & I love all the interactions. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Lane & meeting Michaela's kids & their interactions with the Slayers. I have loved your writing & hate to see this story die..
Comments from author:
I am sorry it took me so long to reply. This story is not dying, I have had several problems (medical and technical) over the last few months but I have been working on the next part (You find out which TV show it is crossed with in the next part). I would say it is about three quarters finished.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [melissouza] • Date [10 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from zigpal
Review:
great update. I was glad to see you updated this and can't wait to find out what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hope I will be posting more soon!

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from melissouza
Review:
Oh my god!!! So happy to see this update!! More trouble on the way, very exciting, but glad to see some real interaction with loralei & her dad....... MORE MORE MORE!!! =)
Comments from author:
Again with the repeat!
Review By [melissouza] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from melissouza
Review:
Oh my god!!! So happy to see this update!! More trouble on the way, very exciting, but glad to see some real interaction with loralei & her dad....... MORE MORE MORE!!! =)
Comments from author:
Okay you have your pills... right! Thanks for the review. I will try to get more out soon.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [melissouza] • Date [16 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from zigpal
Review:
I absolutely love the sequel. You would think that the Council would learn from the past, but apparently not with how they want to handle Lorelai. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. As the saying goes. 'Those who fail to learn the lessons of history are doomed to repeat them.'

In a world with lots and lots of slayers, why would there not be a chosen of the chosen? The Council and 'others' are about to find this out!

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Cristina
Review:
I just found this sequel...and I love how it staring to develop...
Comments from author:
Thanks. The next part is almost ready to go to my beta.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [18 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from melissouza
Review:
I loved Lifesaver!!! I was so excited to see a sequel but sad to see it never completed
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have every intention of finishing the sequel it has just been put on the back burner while I do other things/write other stories.

Blessings

Dave
Review By [melissouza] • Date [29 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gylzgurl
Review:
I just read Life Saver and what you have posted of Live Saver II in one sitting and I loved them! I can't wait for more. Is there anyway to see what's happening with Buffy? And could she get back together with Spike? Pretty please...with a cherry on top? *grins and crosses fingers*
Comments from author:
Thanks. This story will mostly involve the characters from Gilmore Girls, with some guest appearances by some people from Buffy/Angel.
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [8 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrimitivePixx
Review:
Yay sequel!

I'm enjoying this, and may I suggest your writing has gotten even better since your last GG/BtVS

very well done on Emily's character!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was very pleased with Emily's character, it came out just how I envisioned her reactions.
Review By [PrimitivePixx] • Date [22 May 06] • Not Rated
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