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Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from melissaRM
Review:
please update soon
Review By [melissaRM] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from Stationary
Review:
interesting little story you've got here!
Review By [Stationary] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from demoness
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cool story so far hoope u write more soon
Review By [demoness] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from yakuit
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its been soooo long - but I hope its not abandoned - its a wonderful exciting story
Review By [yakuit] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from siriwolf
Review:
awesome story so far!
I can't wait until you update again!
I hope Asher, Jean-Claude and the others will show up more
Review By [siriwolf] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from wover
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A big grin is spread across my face right now!
I absolutely love your characterization of all the characters
Keep up the great writing, I look forward to the next chapter.

Wover
Review By [wover] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from herbsandlemons
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The story is really very good I hope you update soon and I love that Hermione wasn't bothered by Asher's scars!! Will that have some significance? I really hope so please keep up the great work!
Review By [herbsandlemons] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from yakuit
Review:
ohmygod... didnt realise you updated and only found out cos you are on my Recs list

But story still kicking ass... hope more soon...

esp vamp interaction
Review By [yakuit] • Date [17 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from magicangel
Review:
I really like this story! I really hope it hasnt been abandoned! please update!! please? I'll give you a cookie...well not really but I'd really be happy if you updated!
Review By [magicangel] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from seri
Review:
Love this, wish there was more action or drama, but not too much.
Review By [seri] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from MusicalKiller
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More, more, more!!! *crowd cheers*
Review By [MusicalKiller] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from Kirallie
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Poor Harry! How badly hurt is he and who was the wolf that knocked him down?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from (Past Donor)TheStatue
Review:
This is an incredibly well-written and interesting story--certainly one of the very best AB/HP crossovers I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I applaud your ingenuity and very much liked your reasons for why the Hogwarts crew are in St. Louis.

I confess to being a bit anxious about learning what happens next--though I'm not trying to pester!--though I'm certain it's safe to conclude that HP was not infected, as 1)the werewolf was not transformed, and as such was not infectious, and 2)if it had drawn blood, his shirt would have been ripped and Ron would have noticed. (Though I'm sure McGonagall is not going to happy!)

I eagerly await your next chapter whenever you have the time and inclination to write more!
Review By [(Past Donor)TheStatue] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Shortcomings" from Rhyssia
Review:
Hope you are continuing this. :)
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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