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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aussiemel
Review:
Loved This Series. I'm glad you felt compelled to write it after reading my fic. You are a wonderful writter. Please keep up the good work. Please I look forward to seeing more of your fics.

Cya Aussie Mel
Comments from author:
Thanks for giving me the idea and thanks for saying such nice things.

Have loads of ideas for fics, now I just need the time to write them!

All the best,

Dave T.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
An excellent fic! I liked the way you had Tara come for Dawn, it was a nice touch. Many may not consider dying for one's country "good", but there are certainly worse ways to go than saving the lives of fellow soldiers.

Thanks for sharing! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank-you, last part of the 'Dawn's Dead' trilogy to follow soon.

Dave T.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
reminds me alot of this sgt.'s story. http://www.blackfive.net/main/2006/05/memorial_day_se.html good story looking forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for your kind words.

All the best,

Dave T.
Review By [war] • Date [31 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from manic
Review:
I liked this as well. I'm glad someone was there to welcome Dawn home.
Review By [manic] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from morange
Review:
omg, so sad...
Review By [morange] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work. You definitely brought a tear to my eye and I found it a wholly appropriate story for Memorial Day. Well done and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Comments from author:
I have to confess that being British I didn't realise it was Memorial Day in the US, our Rememberance Day isn't 'till 11th November.

Thank-you for your kind words and I hope you like my other stories, may I surgest 'Buffy at the Hot Springs'.

All the best,
Dave T.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Korasei
Review:
Excellent handling of the story, even though those of us who read the other one knew where you were going. I still teared up when Tara came for her.

I could see Tara as Dawn's Guardian Angel. I can also see Dawn as the SGC's or Carter's Guardian Angel. She could be taking over for Dr. Frasier.

There are plot bunnys galore here. For instance, what I want to see now is: Xander will be creating the box to hold and display the medal, etc. He will want answers and will go and get them.
Comments from author:
There will be a third story. This will be set some years after 'Shines the Name' and 'Dulce et...'. It will feature mainly Buffy and Jack, and Buffy gets to know the truth, about a lot of things!
I've started the last story with the sad bit as I want to end the trilogy on an message of hope for the future (or something like that).

I must say I'd not concidered most of the idea's you put forward; Why don't you try to write something, maybe exploring Xander's feelings as he makes the box for her medal? As long as you use an 'Inspired by...' at the beginning, be my guest.

All the best Dave T.
Review By [Korasei] • Date [30 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked the storytelling and characterization overall. My question is why wasn't Dawn briefed that they were in a guerilla situation? She wasn't defending a specific innocent, the site had nothing for them that they could see? Why did she go forward instead of retreat?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from orangemike
Review:
The Old Lie never dies.

The young soldiers still do.
Comments from author:
Too True.
Dave T.
Review By [orangemike] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Worthy a few tears.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [30 May 06] • Not Rated
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