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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from weap
Review:
Any chance for an update :'(?
cause you wrote 4/5 which means 1 more chapter still :'(
Comments from author:
I am not sure at this time. I have had a lot of problems over the last few years and now I am starting a new job - So we will have to wait and see?
Review By [weap] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from BuffyHalliwell
Review:
Im starting to think that there's not gonna be an end to this story, is it? :(
Comments from author:
At the moment you may well be right but maybe one day I will shock you (and me) and finish publishing it. Thanks for reading it though.
Review By [BuffyHalliwell] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Comments from author:
As I commented on another persons review although I have added to many of my stories they are prety much all on hold.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from payday
Review:
I just found this story and I usually wait til after I read the whole thing to comment, but I just have to stop and say wow from the very beginning you pulled me in. I love Buffy and lorelai's thoughts and you got all everybody's personality's down. How you made dawn die was very believable and I can definitely see Buffy loosen herself after that. Buffy & Gilmore Girls are two of my favorite shows and I'm always happy when I see somebody has found a way to do a crossover with them and also make it good. From the few that I've seen most people make a crazy situations and all the characters OOC. I don't think i've seen a pairing like this before so I'm very excited to see how it all turns out. Now I'm off to read the rest of the chapters :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sorry I have not commented before but I do not recall getting a email prompt tth and was just checking over the reviews. I have seen a few OOCs. I always try to hear the character's voice in my head as I write a chapter - If it 'sounds' wrong I change it until it does.

I have added and amended what I have written of the last chapter but as of this time it is on hold - as are my other stories.
Review By [payday] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from WriteTheGoodWrite
Review:
I do like this story, but... Sookie saying that Buffy and Lorelai are "obviously serious" about each other? Not so much. I mean, they've only known each other for a short while, only 'been' together once, neither Lorelai nor Buffy have ever had previous experiences in being with other women, and Sookie's calling it obvious even though she's barely seen them interact? I'm not saying it couldn't happen - I'm saying it couldn't happen that fast. It's only Chapter 4! And what with both of their emotional backgrounds and relationships (commitment issues much?), I doubt either one would be so quick to say "I love you", even if it was true.

I quite enjoy reading this story, and like the premise, but I think you need to slow down for the sake of the characters. I know we writers want all this to happen soon as possible so we can get on with the plot, but that's not how life goes. Even if you had time elapse over a chapter, it would seem more realistic.

Hope that was helpful.
Continue on!
-Cardboard Moon
Comments from author:
The reason I had Sookie saying that is that she has know Lorelai almost half her life I felt that if Lorelai was courageous enough to admit she loves a woman, Sookie would assume she was series after realising that it was not a joke.

As I have stated elsewhere in various reviews, I do believe in love at first sight. In fact I have proof in my great uncle who met and married his wife in two days while on leave from his ship just after WW2 and they are celebrating their sixty third wedding anniversary this year.

Actually as I have indicated there will only be five chapters although the last one will be the longest and is spread over several months.

Thanks for the review. I hope to conclude this one very soon.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from BuffyHalliwell
Review:
I finished re-reading this story, it felt like the first time, this is great, I hope you let us know the end soon...
Comments from author:
I will. Thanks for the review.
Review By [BuffyHalliwell] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, my goodness! What a great deal for Buffy to get what she needed. A loving relationship with Lorelai (& Rory). Unfortunately, the Council now wants to get involved and the readers are reading for the author to provide updates so we can watch the Council guys run out of town tarred and feathered! Will the author be able to finish this oh so lovely story? Time will only tell.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I think I will be finishing it soon. I seem to have finally got over my writers block and my computer is now once more capable of accessing the internet so watch this space.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from rylanaj
Review:
This is a great story! I hope you'll be able to get the rest up soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. As I commented to the last review it is not ready to go to my beta yet but maybe soon?
Review By [rylanaj] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Had to reread the story again. lol. I just love this story :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Now my writing block seems over hopefully it will be posted soon?
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BuffyHalliwell
Review:
This was interesting and catchy, you have a great writting style! I'm looking forward for an update :) but there's no need to rush :P worthy things take longer times.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I am trying to get myself motivated to add to my stories so hopefully you will get the final part of this one before the end of the year!

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [BuffyHalliwell] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great (part of a) story !

Please do the rest.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I am just now trying to get back into writing. Hopefully I will have something to post on some of my stories - Maybe not this one! - Soon.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Martin
Review:
This is a beautiful story(it even made me cry a little), and also very true to the characters. Well mostly, I can more easily see a woman going bi than a man ever would, especially with these two wonderful women it would be easier to switch teams.

And instead of continuing this story, just tweak the ending a little and make a sequel if you want.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I do try to keep in character - unless there is a reason not to that is.

I am not sure what you mean by tweaking the ending, it has already been written - as has the beginning of chapter five, I just need to fill in the middle before posting it.

As for a sequel. Without bringing the Gilmores into Buffy's world more, I do not see it and it would detract from the reason why she does not want them involved.
Review By [Martin] • Date [4 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Ok, I just re-read this story again for the third time. Need an update!! lol. Any chance you will be updating soon?
Comments from author:
I do the same when a story I like has not been updated for some time.

At the moment I am finding it hard to get inspired to do any writing at the moment. Just watch this space for the last part.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from gigi
Review:
I love this story and all of your other ones. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I try to do some writing every day but sometimes (like now) I cannot that is why many of my stories do not get updated as often as I would like. Look to the skies. lol.

Blessings

Dave.
Review By [gigi] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from zigpal
Review:
great update. Of course, Buffy gets her personal life settled, and her calling goes and mucks it up, but there is an upside to a possible Travers pummeling. I can't wait to see how it ends.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Things do seem to happen like that don't they! But then Buffy did not state she would pummel Travers but that she would KILL anyone from the council - Will she follow through!!! DA DA.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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