Any chance of an update. I see you are back and that makes me happy because your fics are fun. This one begs and update if you have some time.

Fire

My plan is to finish Gotham Slayer and then come back to this one. :)

I love the Anita /Buffy bonding over their height. I also like the more caring Anita you are showing. Granted she not miss perfect but she tries. I also like that Buffy calls Richard on his Bull shit.

I am really hoping for an update one day soon. I enjoy this work a lot.

I'm not going to do every chapter. You should be using more commas than you do.

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Buffy hit the edge of the bed and the vampire [dargged] her to the floor beside her.


Should be

dragged

I'm going to be doing this by chapters, so if you get multiple e-mails that's why.


Typos I've spotted. Typos in brackets.


But Anita had come home, from her job [rising] zombies no less, and was in a bad mood.

Probably should be

raising

I'm going to be doing this by chapters, so if you get multiple e-mails that's why.

Typos I've spotted. Typos in brackets.


"She doesn't seem very scared," Gregory was pacing again, "Think Anita will let [he] stay?"


Should be

her

Typos I've spotted. Typos in brackets.

Under the bleachers the were-leopard paced around her making small growling noises and occasionally [liking] her face, which was weird any way you looked at it.


Should be

licking

Okay, I take it back, this isn't a good story it's an excellent story. You're still an evil author though.

Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.

Any chance of an update. This is review 900 so you know we all love it.

The plan is to finish Gotham Slayer first and then come back to this... that's the plan at least ;-) Thanks for the 900th review!

I just reread this story from the beginning, and it's still fascinating. I'm helplessly intrigued. There are so many crossing motives and plans, I bet Anita is tearing out her hair. I hope your muse leads you back here. I really would like to the answers.

Hey i really like this story. i know you haven't updated in awhile but i hope you do soon.

COOOL! Love it! I really like this. Buffy is all Chibi-Slayer and Dawn is just too kawaii. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Okay, I like it. Wasn't sure I would, but I do. :) I do have a question though, and you'll probably address it, but I was wondering: why did Anita not stick with Buffy despite her getting into it with Richard? She trusted Buffy enough to follow her before when they found Kimberlyn so what changed? It's the dark mojo, isn't it? Making people get all distracted from the end goal...grrr bad mojo.

Anyway, good story! Now have Buffy get hit with a pulse of magic, grow up to her 21 yr-old self and kick winged-monster booty in a manner that will make everyone take her seriously. ^_^

hey there it's me again. ive just finished re-reading your fic and i gotta say that i still love it. i know it's been like a year but is there any chance that you'll be continuing this fic? please let me know!

toni

I do plan on coming back to it after I finish Gotham Slayer. I just got horribly stuck, then started something else and... yeah. Anyway, yes I will come back to this... after Buffy has saved Gotham ;-)