This is a fascinating premise and its sad it will likely never see a finish, it deserves it. Its a crossover so often mishandled as others have noted, but this one seemed to have a unique premise. I like the idea of the Scoobs and others being exiles with no going back. Its been done by another author and well, this looked to have the same promise. I hope either the author or someone else (with permission) will continue.
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Not Rated
More, please. You've got an interesting teaser here, and I would dearly love to find out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Very interesting idea and an amusing start - the image of Xan fighting the slayers back from the apples will keep me smiling all afternoon :) I'm not sure that you don't have too many characters arriving in Middle Earth - but I guess I'll find out if its method or madness in the next few chapters.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [9 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Neat. I like the way you are just dribbling out answers to all our questions. And you continue to do a nice job with the characters' voices and thoughts. I look forward to more of your interesting story.
Very interesting start as you have definitely caught my attention and interest. I really hope Dawn is one of the other Human women with the Elves and that Willow didn't really destroy an entire Earth. Again. I have no idea of where you are going with this story, but I can't wait to find out.