I love what you have so far please update this wonderful fic again soon.

very interesting, this story has the potential to pretty much go off on any tangent. Can't wait to see what you do with it :D

wow!
i like this one, write more?
please!?

Thank you and I'm trying but Jack is being stubborn

*whistles* That trio sound like nasty pieces of work. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad to see that you're continuing this, it's a great story.

I'll be surprised if Jack doesn't check out Oz's van in the morning, just to see if the trio of vamps are locked in the cage.

Oz listens to Wicked? Cool. Owned the CD for six months, never heard it, but the book is awesome. I'm surprised Jack didn't connect between Oz and 'Oz' ;)

Wart is cool. I look forward to continued revelations about his species and his sanity ;)

Oz is cool.

Great story :D

Thanks so much for the update. Boy, Jack is going to lay into Oz when he gets back. At least he'll try to :)

yep, he will.

This is a really lovely story. I like the look inside Jon's head (which is a fairly scary place if he's thinking of putting down three people he think are human even if they are vicious), and the look at Oz from the outside. Wart is also a wonderful character and I'm not sure if I'd like to see more about his past or just have him be who he is with no explanation. Regardless, I hope you continue this story.

I was hoping that this one would continue eventually. Whoopeee!

Neat premise. I kept waiting for the battle, but I guess when you've said all that needs to be said then you're done.

Interesting chapter. Definitely moving along.

It is marked complete, but it doesn't feel that way, especially in comparison to most of your work. Your stuff generally has a definite ending while this feels more like a cliffhanger. Maybe I'm just missing something.

Sorry about that. It was supposed to be a one chapter story that refused to stay finished. I never got around to fixing the 'complete/incomplete' choice. IT's fixed now.

You know having Clone!Jack discover the Buffy'verse, would probably be good for him.

You know the word 'discover' is such a tricky word.... it can mean so many things.

Funny, to think each has a huge secret & each thinks the other is somewhat 'normal'... and any hint of 'military' ties will make Oz paranoid & thinking "Initiative" while some weird events might make Jack think "Goa'uld" (flashing yellow eyes?) that kind of thing---
The complete non-mention of the Jack clone after that ep is really weird, bad continuity... it's the same with Cassie she just never appears again..I think there's maybe a mention once by Carter that Cassie's with her? Jack is never seen again... The SGC were fools to force Jack into being a 'real' teenager instead of just giving him a rank in the AF & a place on an SG team--

Yes, the writers were cruel to ignore Mini-Jack, but that just makes him more available to us!

Ah! I'm really enjoying Wart's contribution to this story, and I can't wait to see how and when Jack will finally understand what Wart meant about Oz going looking for a challenge and for 'target practice' in the middle of the night with no visible weapons or backup.

A pleasure to read another chapter in this story, as always.

Thank you

I like Wart. He's fun.
Are you going to write more road-trip?

hope too

This was pretty great. Would be good if you could continue it. Although I noticed it said complete, it didn't feel complete.

Sorry. It's not complete, but now it says that it's not complete.