Review of chapter "The Lady's a Harlot" from Letomo
A very nice ending, poetic. Nicely done!
Review By [Letomo
] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lady's a Harlot" from Elleria
This is really good.
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lady's a Harlot" from desartartt
Review By [desartartt
] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lady's a Harlot" from VillageOrchid
Well done, in the "it could have been (part of) an episode."
Your author ID being similar to the character ID had me worried for a moment... but you did well with the formula that not all "old ones" or "survivors" are worth saving - or redeaming.
Comments from author:
Thanks. After studying I & II Kings last year, I couldn't get the idea of what one of the Bible's most notorious bad girls could have done with immortality.
I can understand the concern with the IDs. I do have a habit of taking User IDs from some of my original pieces, and Annadel Richards is one of my favorite flat characters. (She's mentioned perhaps once or twice in the background of two secondary characters.)
Actually, now that you mention it, I do have a pentient for names beginning with A: Aligh, Araya, Annadel, Alexia, Arabella, and my poor daughter will be dubed "Allie," short for Alexandria. It's definately something I'm working on balancing out.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]