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A short trip to New York

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Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh, this was priceless! The topper was the fact the manager was a pedophile, though. Poor Elliot. Taken out by a teenager. LOL.
Comments from author:
My brain is a strange and sometimes wonderful place to live. *snicker* This was the scene that started off the Dawn Winchester universe. I had to figure out just what Dawn was doing with John in a motel room, not that I ever considered hooking those two up! The reason that I did that with the manager was that I wanted to show why Elliot and Olivia showed up in the first place. As for Elliot, I don't think he's ever going to live this one down. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from GundumM
Review:
loved it
Comments from author:
hehehe, this scene was what started the whole thing off.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from Rivulet
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Loved how they met Stabler and Benson! Great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Rivulet] • Date [8 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from DirectorLady
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I love this series! I have read it at least five times and it just keeps getting better. Are you going to continue the series? I would love to read your ideas for what they do after "Closing the Hellmouth" ended. Please, please, please? I promise chocolate-covered cheesecake? I also love your After the Fall series. Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Actually, I've just started another one, but as I have 5 yes five! stories currently being worked on and posted, I'm really holding off working on it. As for Life After the Invasion, the next thing up is the trip to Disneyland. I hope the company has its insurance paid up!
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from Ansku
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:D
Comments from author:
*shrug* what can I say? I have a weird muse.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from TheEternalPixie
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i would love to see a sequel to this later on in the series something with more chapters *hint hint* Also funny as hell!!!
Comments from author:
Well, Spike, Xander, Dean, and Sarah, a fifteen year old Potential are about to head to New York in chapter 24 of Closing the Sunnydale Hellmouth. That has potential to end up being in SVU's playground! :)

I hope you're happy because the plot bunny has bit!
Review By [TheEternalPixie] • Date [31 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from TarnishedGold
Review:
Oh sneaky, I missed this. I love it. I can just imagine John's face when she shot him. Keep up the good work.
Gold
Comments from author:
Oh, yes. A combination of oh god she shot a cop and proud papa she hit what she aimed at!
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from frogstompinfun
Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I Loved it SVU is one of my favorite TV shows that and Criminal Intent with Gorram I loved this crossover.......poor Elliot though Dawns right he did kinda deserv it!
Comments from author:
It was just a matter of bad timing, he didn't know Dawn had just finished her shower or was even in the bathroom, although he was looking for a kidnapped girl and Dawn wasn't expecting anyone to come through the door that wasn't a bad guy.
Review By [frogstompinfun] • Date [12 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from LadyFoxFire
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**snicker** that just typical Winchester/Summer's luck!
Comments from author:
They would get a room in a motel where the manager had kidnapped a girl around Dawn's age. *shakes head in disbelief at muse*
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [11 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from supernaturalfanatic
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I, for one, was in hysterics when Dawn shot the man... And the manager just screamed pedophile! Loved this story... Keep going with the side stories!
Comments from author:
I imagine there will be a few here and there. I was writing the part where they were talking to Captain Craigan and it hit me that's why they were there, the guy was trying to divert attention.
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from Xandra2
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lol, cute.
Comments from author:
Thanks I had fun.
Review By [Xandra2] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from Chelsea
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Cute. I liked it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Chelsea] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from (Past Donor)gbholderness
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OMG!!!! One of my favorite shows is Law & Order SVU. I loved this short crossover. Go Dawn w/ your bad self. John is so figgin sexy in dad mode. damn. have a great night
b
Comments from author:
As I said this is the cross that started the series. I had the whole in the motel scene in my head and started wondering how Dawn ended up John's daughter. Then I realized, he really could be!
Review By [(Past Donor)gbholderness] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from iroshi
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Goodness, you really don't like Elliott, do you? *giggle* It was a fun read. Looking forward to the next full story in the series. :D Want to see who you pair Sam up with!
Comments from author:
Actually, he just happens to be the male detective that I know the most about from that series, that's all. And it was more a matter of bad timing than anything else.
Review By [iroshi] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just a little bit of trouble" from immortalwizardelffan
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LMAO! Well we already know that any police department outside of Sunnydale is way more competent. I love the interaction between John, Dawn and Liv and Elliot. Perosnally, I think Elliot may now have a little respect for John teaching Dawn to fight to protect herself. And that was a swift lie John told about the boys, well probably not so much a lie as a stretching of the truth as I've no doubt the boys got kidnaped and held prisoner by some demons when they were younger.
Comments from author:
Actually that came from two different fics I've read within the past three months at fanfic.net. Both of them featured Dean or Sam being abducted and the results. The first one is Human Monsters and the other one is Final Selection. Both are very well done. Read them! I have no doubt that they were kidnapped by the usual, or rather usual for them, many times over the years. I just couldn't get this little fic out of my head and then I wondered where the story started, and that got the whole verse up and running.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [10 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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