That was excellent. I absolutely adore The Saints and with a few well-chosen words you captured them perfectly. And it's always good to have some rope. ;D
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Absolutely perfect, as usual. I'm interested what the boys truly think of Jayne, though, with his conscience that he tries to ignore and pretend isn't there.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Marvelous! This was so well done, you have an excellent understanding of all the characters involved in the story. The Captain's relationship with River was beautifully flushed out, and perfectly told. I loved the way you portrayed the brothers clinging to each other, and slowly allowing River into their family. The descriptions were wonderfully vivid, and I could clearly picture every scene. This was a gorgeous story, expertly crafted, and a joy to read!
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Yes. Just...yes. Perfect. You did absolutely brilliantly. And you dealt with Niska and Badger, too! I don't suppose they'd be able to find the Alliance operative, but he, at least, wasn't delusional about the evil he committed. Wonderful.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
"Etching into their skin all the things the Alliance tried to take from them,"
That fits so well. You haven't made it difficult at all to imagine Connor or Murphy on Serenity. Bravo.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Minutes" from Angelfirenze
Review:
This is absolutely excellent. I felt like I was actually hearing Mal speak. It was so easy to hear the dialogue and imagine the scene playing out. Brilliant job.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
I really enjoyed this. You fit the boys in there perfectly :) I'd like to read more. Maybe not of this fic, since it has a very finished feel to it, but more of Connor and Murphy's adventures would be great!
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Joyful
