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Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Flipped" from dialNforNinja
You suck. Why do you suck? Because you wrote this cool fic, but leave Lex's question unanswered.
Comments from author:
Hmmm.... What do you think their future should be?
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Flipped" from Dragonelf
Pretty nice story and I hope you get inspired to add more stories to this series.

::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::

"Are You Pondering What I'm Pondering?"
"I think so, Brain, but if we covered the world in
salad dressing wouldn't the aspargus feel left out?"
- Pinky and the Brain
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Flipped" from LastScorpion
What a terrific crossover! It all made so much sense, and it fixed practically everything, and it was really funny to boot. And you did a beautiful job with all the characters. I especially liked how you portrayed Lana. Thank you for writing this and putting it up!
Comments from author:
Hey thanks :D

I portrayed Lana great? Sweet :D

And you're welcome ;)

Hmm, I still need to rewrite/format a few bits...

The 'quest' with Willow and Tara should pop up in another fic. I'm also planning on a short sequel/wrap-up, once I've seen Smallville's Season 6 opener. Man, I can't wait for the DVD set :)
Review By [LastScorpion] • Date [21 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from VillageOrchid
What I liked about this chapter the most was how you continued to follow up with the smallville Lex-vibe in that he is always looking for friends and family. Yes he has great ambition, but he wants people to protect and who care about him.
Comments from author:
Much thanks. :) You're the first of two to say that. The second liked the same thing, and he only really knows Lex from the older comics and the animation... Huh.

Anyway, your review worried at me until I realized that Andrew had been left behind without any support or acknowledgement from Lex, so I dropped in some eye contact and a nod of the head... Then left Jonathon with a handshake :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Finding" from KingHenrytheV
The herb description is unnecessarily complicated and a bit hard to follow -- I didn't get anything at all out of the entire paragraph. Also, the "side-bars" are just extra space to scroll through and bothersome.
Comments from author:
First bit, hopefully fixed. Second bit... Yep, still filler, flaws inherent. I.. don't want to either drop them or try to roll them back into the main fic, but the next chapters stand without them ;)

Darn! 8,8,7,7, and now a 6. Hope I can turn this trend around...

*sigh* Thanks :) An honest 6, especially when I spent two-and-a-half chapters with Lex stuck in one room... I'll step it up a bit ;)
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from VillageOrchid
I agree-- a ruthless but not quite evil Lex Luthor is more sympathetic than Warren. Which is why Lex might have to stay in the Buffy verse. Interesting. thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comments from author:
I'm not going to say what it is now, but that 'sympathetic' bit just set the story arc. Thanks :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from KingHenrytheV
Cute chapter, but the "filler" felt like a waste of time. Not really funny or amusing, just a way to keep the reader from the actual story.
Comments from author:
Hmm... you have a point and the characters do kind of fray around the edges... That ugly block text thing...

I'll edit it down into a recurring column and place it below the author's note, so it will be less of a distraction from the story. Bonus: I can add more later (heh) without backing myself into a corner.

Thanks for the advice, it definitely needed attention.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from thule
Very fun, I'm really enjoying this. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [thule] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Sideways" from matthew
Well, this has got to be one of the oddest concepts I've seen in a while. Writing style is pretty good, and characterization so far seems on target. I think I'll keep reading this one.
Comments from author:
Dude! Just looked through your profile and saw Challenge 620 from nearly two years ago. Props to you man, just sorry I didn't write this sooner :)
Thanks and good use of the librarian. ;)
Review By [matthew] • Date [23 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Descending" from CPTSkip
Oh, this is just too strange and too neat. I really hope your write more as I am sure Lex can turn the situation between the Trio and the Scoobies around. He is just too much smarter and sneakier than Warren. Plus, no killing Tara! Yay!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from KevinSchultz
Fun idea, but I found it a bit confusing in terms of the sheer amount of back-and-forth that you're doing. I'd recommend either expanding them out more and putting a visual demarcation in between each section, or else separating each perspective into separate chapters.
Comments from author:
Noted, i'll try some stuff out.
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Past Donor)merlyna
I'd love to see more of this. Really interesting to see what Lex will do and what Warren will do. Cool that they both recognize where they are. I'd be wondering if I was dreaming, or being held captive in a created environment! Thanks for writing. :)
Comments from author:
Welcome, and I like that idea :)
Review By [(Past Donor)merlyna] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Interesting idea. Very odd... which is a good thing :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Dmitri
You know, this has potential. Thanks for sharing it.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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