Review of chapter "The event" from
LunaReview:
interesting- I was definitely confused until I read your explanation in the review below.
Comments from author:
You're right. Shifted it forwards to a proper author's note and corrected some grammar mistakes :)
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Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The event" from
lucidityReview:
Okay - after I read your explanation... I loved it! Perhaps you should add the AiW explanation at the end of it so it's more clear.
Anyway - great little idea! Very funny:)
Review By [
lucidity] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The event" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
It was interesting. I don't know if I got all the references, but it was interesting. Thanks for responding to my challenge!
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks man. No problems :)
Anyway, in 'Alice in Wonderland' Alice wanders into the white rabbit's house and winds up eating or drinking something so she grows to an immense size and gets stuck. The white rabbit asks his friend Bill to go down the chimney, where Alice's foot kicks him out of the story ;)
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Not Rated
