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Review of chapter "The event" from (Current Donor)

Luna

Review:

interesting- I was definitely confused until I read your explanation in the review below.

Comments from author:

You're right. Shifted it forwards to a proper author's note and corrected some grammar mistakes :)

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Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "The event" from (Past Donor)

lucidity

Review:

Okay - after I read your explanation... I loved it! Perhaps you should add the AiW explanation at the end of it so it's more clear.

Anyway - great little idea! Very funny:)

Comments from author:

Thanks. Early work from when I relied too much on the reviews and too little on the author's notes. Been going back, checking through them and reintegrating my responses and acknowledgements about such things like "Ooh, that's a cool idea. Thanks, I'll use it next chapter." onto the story page proper.

Review By [ (Past Donor)

lucidity] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "The event" from BlameyFomorrii

Review:

It was interesting. I don't know if I got all the references, but it was interesting. Thanks for responding to my challenge!

Comments from author:

Heh, thanks man. No problems :)

Anyway, in 'Alice in Wonderland' Alice wanders into the white rabbit's house and winds up eating or drinking something so she grows to an immense size and gets stuck. The white rabbit asks his friend Bill to go down the chimney, where Alice's foot kicks him out of the story ;)

Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Not Rated

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