Review of chapter "Of Immortals and Other Disasters" from AriaDragoncrest
Good. I'm off to read part II. :)
Review By [AriaDragoncrest
] • Date [28 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Immortals and Other Disasters" from Revello
Good idea, good plot and I nearly passed on it the second I realized there was no spaces between the paragraphs. But since I can't pass up any Buffy is or could be an immortal story I pulled on my glasses, switched my text size to largest and made my way through it.
It was definitely worth the hassle but in order to get new readers and reviews I'd suggest going back in and editing the chapter to add in the spaces to make it an easier read :)
Good work on the story though, really good work!
Review By [Revello
] • Date [23 Jan 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Immortals and Other Disasters" from KelinciHutan
Huh. Kinda weird, but I think I liked it. Methos is always niffty.
Review By [KelinciHutan
] • Date [19 Mar 05] • Not Rated