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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MinaLynn
Review:
I'm enjoying this so far (granted I'm only on chapter 3 but it's great so far) I just wanted to make a comment about something.

This isn't a reflection on your story but I've found that a lot of stores and well the show all focus on how 'selfish' Sam is but they always forget one thing - John and Dean made him that way. Now it doesn't completely excuse him from his actions but he was taught to be that way by both John and Dean so why are they so surprised when his 'selfishness' pops up? What do you think?
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work!! Hope you did/do a sequal!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Ansku
Review:
You have some nice touches, but like someone else said, a beta would do it a world of good. For example I'm hoping you didn't really mean that Dean actually wished that Sam had had an opportunity to mar Jess... ;)
Comments from author:
Uhm let me think. Uh Nope that's not what I meant. LOL! Sorry this was my first story I haven't looked at it in a while. Thanks for the review though. My latest story should be much better.

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Review By [Ansku] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from trouble
Review:
I'm all for a sequel. snicker! Let the snark fly.
Review By [trouble] • Date [24 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from JoAnneStorm
Review:
Beyond the fact that you really need to find a beta, this story is also in the wrong category. It needs to be in the non-crossover category since it is not a crossover.
Comments from author:
Sorry about the categroy. My mistake. Do you have a suggestion for beta?
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Review By [JoAnneStorm] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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