I hope you will be inspired to write a sequel to this story or inspired to turn this story into a series.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nine Lives - X" from AmarinRose
Review:
Wow, that was a very unique story. At first I thought the group (Paul, Cat and Alfred) were all Immortals, but having Alfred as a Watcher works even better. It's been ages since I've seen the Cassandra episodes, but having her be Cat really fits in well. I'm sad she had to leave her life, though, but it was inevitable.
Comments from author:
I brought her back for a brief encore, but Cat was just a brief footnote to Cassandra's life, a fun personality she used when she wanted a change, so she's not too upset.
In L&C canon Cat left the show at the end of season 1 - I think in comic book canon they made Cat an unmarried mother at that point, which wouldn't have appealed to TV executives at the time.
Review By [AmarinRose] • Date [24 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nine Lives - X" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Good story.
I like the twist that Bruce is PreImmortal. Should be a fun story if it ever happens.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [21 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Nice twist at the end. Up until that I had assumed that Batman was steering entirely clear of Metropolis in order to keep Superman from penetrating his identity. None of what had occurred until then actually required Batman's or Wayne's presence in Metropolis. I recall the line "you peeked" from some crossover cartoon episode years ago. :)
EDIT: sequel idea removed (no sense in broadcasting a potential plot twist to everyone :) and review made public.
*** Ponder
Review By [Ponder] • Date [11 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Does that mean there will be a sequel? I love this story.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nine Lives - X" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A highly entertaining and satisfactory conclusion/new beginning. Plus, I loved the kicker about Alfred being THAT kind of Watcher and Bruce/Batman a future immortal.
Very good work!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]