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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting twist of timelines. Nice to see Cordy involved. Definitely set up for a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks, there's a little bit more twist than that. Thanks for reading
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from grd
Review:
This story deserves a sequel.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks for reading. Yes, there is more. Just keep reading
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CedarPineSpruce
Review:
Lovely! Ok, onto the sequel....
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you like it so far.

P.S. I've gone back and edited some things.
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AnimeRonin
Review:
INteresting... very interesting... *goes onto next fic*
Comments from author:
Heh... I hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoyed writing them.

VC
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from spikeismine
Review:
very well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [14 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Ladeia
Review:
*squeals* yayy.. I love it. :) I'm glad someone took my challenge and you've done an excellent job with it. Thanks... Hope to see lots and lots more!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm really glad you love it.

Take a look at the sequels and tell me what you think.

E-mail me if you have ideas you might like to see.

VC
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really liked your Helloween story. But now I look forward to seeing how Alec and Corcy change the timeline since they were ... changed. I hope you continue as I like your story and your storytelling.
Comments from author:
Thanks...

And yes, they'll affect the timeline. Other things will eventually... affect... the timeline too. As this will eventually be worked into a multi cross.

Hope you read the sequel too.

VC
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from danimc
Review:
Very cool, but please tell me that the gang noticed her little slip o' the tounge. I wonder hoe long it'll take em to realize sonethins different with Cor and Xan.....Oh, and update soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it.

Yes the gang will notice. The further it goes along, the further the pair will progress.
Review By [danimc] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from banner
Review:
This is interesting, and different.
I'll be watching for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

More to come.

VC
Review By [banner] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Genesis
Review:
this is a good story I liked the way it flowed and it promise to be interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

There is works for a sequel.
Review By [Genesis] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from cwolf
Review:
The story is good. But like someone else, I'm curious how a tv show that didn't exist until the year 2000 had costumes out on a day that took place in a year that came before Dark Angel was even thought about much less created
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Yes, I know the show didn't exist. Well this is an Alternate Universe. But aren't all fan fiction Alternate Universes??? It will be explained in the sequel.

VC
Review By [cwolf] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bill
Review:
Great start! Now you got me wanting a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.

I do have plans in the works for a sequel or two.
Review By [Bill] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Thewander
Review:
Very good hope for a fast update
Comments from author:
Thanks

The first one just kind of exploded... I can't promise udates as quickly this early.

We'll see what happens.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ChaoticFred
Review:
I like this, and am curious to see how this alters the Scoobies' interactions with each other.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Yes, it will alter at least some things that happen further down the road.

I have plans for a couple additions to the series up in my brainpan.

VC
Review By [ChaoticFred] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Sadfru
Review:
great story hope for more soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.

This one kind of jumped out onto the pages. Will think of something soon for a sequel. Suggestions are always welcome.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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