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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from locard
Review:
This is a damn fine story and I hope you will keep posting.
Review By [locard] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Shayna
Review:
Wow! I really liked how the people in SGC made her look harmless and a little dumb, so no one would start asking questions or try to use her!
Review By [Shayna] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Jack's reaction to the cat-rabbit that crawled into his lap reminds me a lot of my ex. My ex wasn't a cat person until a kitten claimed him; then I found my ex curled up with the kitten like it was a teddy bear. Fond memory, that...

I also have to say that I'm in the camp that hopes Buffy stays with SG-1.

You've got an interesting story here and I appreciate you sharing it. Hopefully, you'll get a chance to finish it some day.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Gideon
Review:
Since Gen Hammond recognized Xander's ring he should be ok. I don't expect he will be happy when he meets Buffy though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kittenpoker
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Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So glad you've resumed updating this story! Xander's entrance to the SGC was classic. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from bradsan
Review:
Great you updated. I love it so far and still hoping it is Buffy. Well she is the only one from the Slayers who had experience with military. The other Slayers not so much.

I really hope she won't go back with Xander. She is happy now and even when she can't remember much she is happy and SG-1 and Hammond cares for her. I even got the impression that a few others on the base cares for her without asking anything back. So for me I would love if she won't go back with Xander and they let her where she is.

And there is still a slayer running around who can protect and fight the fight they want her back for.

So let her be happy for once. This is her heaven let her have it she has done enough. If it's Buffy she deserves some happiness. she never got it even in season eight she didn't have it.

great update, good story and very good writing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awesome chapter I honestly hope she doesn't go with Xander and I am wondering if she is going to remember him or not trust him? I am looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Great chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay. Willow was using the same technology as Athena. Not the same person. Got it. Enjoying the character moments in your story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Greywizard
Review:
Have to review, if only to say that it's good to see another chapter of this show up. ;-)

Whatever the reason for the delay, I hope it doesn't bedevil you any further, and we se more of this, and can finally find out who Athena is.

I actually hope it's Faith, or Vi, Or Rona, of only to break the 'lost unknown Slayer who is found/rescued by SG-1' cliche of it being Buffy. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm a little confused, because I thought that "Athena" was meant to be Willow -but somehow strangely with Slayer powers - perhaps some side effect from the joining spell?
Comments from author:
Nope from first chapter you see that Willow made the rings.. but no one had yet tried the fourth spell in the rings... But was always a slayer, never used magic
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Rich
Review:
You get an extra rating point, because I'm really glad to see this one going again. I've returned to it several times, and always hoped you'd get back to it someday - and the new chapter doesn't disappoint. Congratulations, and keep up the good work !.
Comments from author:
Have all my notes, had the outline, and have had a horrible few years learning more about hospital and medical procedures than anyone but a doctor or nurse should know.

Finally decided to sit down.. finish cleaning these up and post them.

So wonder how many want to strangle me for still not saying who Athena is and Xander getting distracted when describing her.
Review By [Rich] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
This is excellent and very unusual. I'd love to find out more if you get inspired.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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