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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
Sorry about the confusion.

I was referring to the mess in the mall - all the little Judge bits.

I went back and read it again today and discovered that I had missed the part about Cordy picking up the pieces.
Comments from author:
Ah, yeah... you know... in canon, I think everyone else helped with the clean up... so, I'm thinking that this pretty much follows canon other than the differences that I made.

And, I do hope to continue working on this series soon.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
Review:
Over way to soon. Nice reveal; it worked better keeping the others out of it. By the way, who did clean up the mess in this AU?
Comments from author:
Mess? Do you know how many times I proofread my stories over and over again to find any mistakes and correct them? Gosh, if anyone finds a mistake "mess" in my story, please tell me and I'll correct it immediately.

Thanks for reading.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CedarPineSpruce
Review:
Nicely done! Ok, reading next sequel....
Comments from author:
Thanks... hope you enjoy.

P.S. I've gone back and edited a bit of this story.
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Rob
Review:
Good story so far. Liked that you changed both Xander and Cordy. And it's good they finally 'came out'.


Rob
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Well, they've only told Giles, the others don't know... yet.

VC
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bill
Review:
Great start! Too bad Xander didn't have a stake, Is he gonna have one at the mall? Or better yet, will Cordelia have one?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Well, he's not going to be unarmed anymore. Cordelia... she's Max... did Max use weapons if she didn't have to?
Review By [Bill] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from banner
Review:
I'm delighted you are continuing this...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the vote of confidence.

Glad you like it.

To tell you a secret, this is my first fan fic... oops, cat's out of the bag now.

VC
Review By [banner] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
Great idea for a story. This is one crossover I haven't seen done believably before, but I think you got it. I really like the fact that you got Cordelia in on the great costume caper this time around. Pelase write more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it.

Well, as you know, transgenics and ordinarys don't normally mix well so I didn't think he should suffer through this alone.

Just took a quick dinner break before I continued on with the story. Don't want me to pass out from malnutrition at the keyboard, do you? haha
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Alltorian
Review:
Good story so far. I like how Xander & Cordelia call each other Alec and Max. Looking forward to another installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

There are bound to be slip ups every now and then.

I know, I can't wait either.

VC
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Rob
Review:
Good story, I like what you're doing with this series so far. But your chapters are way tiny, maybe build them up to a 1000+ words?


Rob
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I'll keep that in mind.
Review By [Rob] • Date [29 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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