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Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from starwolf
Review:
this was a very solid story. very well told. but, why were the two freaks job able to hide from Anita, JC, Asher etc... the leapords and wolves. if faith's slayer and cat can get together and she shifts it would fix her knee. i'm on to your next story. thanks for sharing this
Review By [starwolf] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rescue Me" from TLCdemon
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The story is good, but you should really put a disclaimer on the chapters where Faith is rapped. Triggering... The formatting is hard to follow along with large amounts of grammatical and spelling errors in the first chapter. Besides that it was good.
Review By [TLCdemon] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from deathgeonous
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Ah, I had kinda forgotten about this series, which is a shame since I like it so much. Although, you might want to reformat this fic, because, well, it needs it. All these lines broken in the middle of the line. Bad for reading. Well, other then that, this was quite the good fic, so, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm not sure how to fix it, it's copied and pasted
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from Blkwoman
Review:
Love the entire series. Always look forward to updates. What ever happened to "Down Came the Rain"? Can't find it anywhere on this site? Also, can't find your stories by searching for author. Have to go to Anita Blake general stories to find.
Comments from author:
Now that you mention it i dont see it either, i think maybe i removed it? If I did im sure it's because i wanted more chapters to form before getting hopes up. Thanks for your feedback!
Review By [Blkwoman] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from Jbperkins
Review:
Still one of my favorite stories. What a wonderful introduction to your stories. I'm enjoying "Hush Little Baby", "Only Willow Bends", and "Anita Blake, executioner,...". Waiting for more updates on those and your other stories.
Comments from author:
thanks! im going to continue writing and will post as soon as im able!
Review By [Jbperkins] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from deathgeonous
Review:
As always this was, well, not a joy but more like a... pleasure to read, for I have always loved this fic. Well, thank you for writing this, goodbye for now.
Comments from author:
that sound like you might have like it? *laugh* ;P thanks for reading
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from Buza
Review:
Nice story really liked it.
Comments from author:
thank you glad it pleases you :)
Review By [Buza] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from LadyYuna
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I love this story. It is touching and also very funny in places.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [LadyYuna] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, first time I've read this in quite a while, and I've never read the sequels, so... ahh, anyways this is a good fic, and I look forward to see what you have done for the sequels. thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from Christy
Review:
what a wonderful story. Excellent job!
Comments from author:
Gracias!''

Ali
Review By [Christy] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from (Past Donor)mpop
Review:
great story.
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [21 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Lovely story. Thank you.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice story. I really enjoyed it, and will now go on to sequils.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into The Trees" from (Current Donor)DreamSmith
Review:
Hey there.
Okay, just found this, and I so far I kind of like it (and I almost never read Anita Blake crossovers; when the books went so far from where they started, it left a bad taste in my mouth for all things Anita).

I like your writing style, and lil' Faith is so cuuuute!

However....
You thank your beta reader for their help, but from what I'm seeing here, they're not helping enough. There are a lot of mistakes that are slipping through, and they distract from what is otherwise a very nifty story. It isn't just line-edit stuff, either, there are also things like:

“What are you?” I breathed, neither were human I was almost positive and both were powerful.
Not nearly as powerful as I was, but close. God they were close.

Umm....
How can someone be 'not nearly as powerful' as someone, and at the same time very, very CLOSE to being as powerful?
That kind of thing is also the Beta's job to point out to the author; slips like that happen all the time when you're in a writing frenzy (or at least they happen to me ^_^)

Anyways, even though I have some issues with it, I'm enjoying the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)DreamSmith] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "London Bridge is Falling Down" from Obsidian
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*CLAP* *CLAP* *CLAP* Bravo, well done. thanks for this. made me laugh and cry. good writing.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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