Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oberon
Ok... first of all I say you're writing skills need somework. Half the time I have no idea who was talking. Secondly, you don't quite have Illyria's voice down.
Comments from author:
I love to write, but I'm not very good at it, though I'm hoping to change that. I know my writing skills need work; I'll be the first one to admit it. I'm sorry the story didn't live up to your standards. As for Illyria's voice, I will admit that she wasn't my favourite character, and the only reason I wrote this story was because I had the idea that wouldn't get out of my head, so I wrote it. To be honest, half the time, I didn't listen when she spoke, so I'm most likely the last person who should have written this story, but I don't care. I wrote something and gave it a good amount of effort. Hopefully, I'll do better on my next story. Thank you for letting me know what you didn't like. I'll be sure to get better at it in time.
Review By [oberon
] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Not Rated