Review of chapter "The Long And Winding Road" from BeatriceOtter
There really isn't enough story for me to review, but a comment about your story summary: homosexual relationships in fanfic are called slash. Homosexual relationships between females are called femmeslash. These terms are widely known and used in all fandoms I've seen. (In fact, the term comes from classic Star Trek fanzines originally.) Second, you don't have to mention the fact that your sex is explicit unless there's something kinky or unusual about it (BDSM, threesome, etc.) in your summary, because that's what the rating is for.
Review By [BeatriceOtter
] • Date [4 Jul 06] • Not Rated