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Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from grrovvyhevens
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I hope you do update, but knowing the stats about updating after so long, I doubt you will.

I do happen to like this story, I wanted to see Buffy against Edward
Review By [grrovvyhevens] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from katimaviklindzy
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Oh c'mon! you can't just leave it at that! It's really getting fun with the League almost compleatly together. I hope you plan to update.
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from Novagirl
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this is great though i think it should be a Buffy/Mina pairing to make it more interesting
Review By [Novagirl] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from gigi
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I don't know if I can believe that Buffy would make a wish so carelessly since they've made it an issue in the show, but this does make for an interesting concept. I like it when Buffy isn't the good guy. Makes things more fun. I hope you continue writing this. Please update.
Review By [gigi] • Date [27 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from purrfus
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Interesting ideas.

Thanks for putting the portrait in his room under cover. One of the stupidest things the movie did was show everyone entering Dorian's house with the oh so obvious missing painting on the stairwell. Since Dorian can't look at the portrait without breaking the spell why would he hang it in the stairwell?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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I've been thinking and I'm wondering will Buffy come across the Scourge of Europe at all? That might help to jar some memories.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm actually thinking that eventually there might be a cameo of the scourge of europe. I have a couple of ideas about how that will turn out. oh, and buffy won't be evil for too much longer, i promise. thanx for reading and reviewing. i hope to update soon and am very sorry that i haven't done so sooner.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [15 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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OOh just found this story, interesting I'm looking forward to more. I hope Buffy won't be evil for too much longer. Will this be Buffy and Alan Q then?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [15 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introducing the League Part One" from Valkyrie
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Please tell me she sticks it to the man.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieving the portrait" from Odjn
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Neat. A bad-guy-Buffy. Will be reading more, if only for curiosity's sake.
Review By [Odjn] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieving the portrait" from kimbclar
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I like this cold Buffy/Elizabeth. Can't wait for more.
Review By [kimbclar] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Feeling the Rage" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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Who needs character development when you can just wish things into being?
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [4 Jul 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Fantom" from Wise
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So far as Buffy's wish goes, the problem with using such a plot device is that it IS a plot device and cannot stand before actual character development. Changing her fundamental nature with such a clunky thing as this leaves a bad taste in my mouth. In effect, with this wish, you have created a character who just happens to be named 'Buffy,' but has little in common with the genuine article.

Furthermore, I have serious doubts about the willingness of vengeance demons to grant the wishes of *anyone* in the Scoobie gang after what happened to Anya and Halfrek. Not to mention, all we've seen of vengeance demons thus far seems to indicate that they actually approach the 'client,' talk to them, and try to manipulate them into making a careless wish (as opposed to hiding behind a nearby shrubbery and listening in for the magic words).
Comments from author:
Yeah, unfortunately I know that it is just a plot device. It was either do the falling in the portal thing, a failed spell, or the demon wish. When I come up with a better idea to get Buffy into the LXG world, I will. I've just had this story in my head for a while and needed to get it out. And as for Buffy not being in character, she'll eventually show up as the slayer we all know and love.
Review By [Wise] • Date [4 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Fantom" from aforestgrew
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I like the story so far, even if Buffy is evil for awhile. One thing I noticed is that, while nobody believes the reasons you gave for her going bad, even if you didn't realize, there is a legitimate reason in the first chapter. During her little wish-fest Buffy clearly states, "I wish I didn't care," and, "I wish I didn't have to be such a good guy," and well, right now she clearly isn't a good guy and doesn't care that she's killing humans. It would make a kind of sense if being the Slayer eventually overrode her wish because let's face it, the Powers couldn't have made Slayers without some kind of contingency plan in case of magic, or demon side-effects, etc. I've never seen the movie LXG but I still can't wait to see what you do with the story.

(I'm not totally sure this is right but when I was reading a summary on LXG they spelled the Phantom as 'The Fantom' so you may want to check up on that)
Comments from author:
Thank you sooo much for realizing what I was doing with this story. And yes, the Buffy the Slayer will override Elizabth the mercenary eventually. Thanx for the review. You're right about the spelling of The Fantom. I forgot about that. Also, one small problem. You've never seen LXG??!!!! Definitely a must-see movie.
Review By [aforestgrew] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Fantom" from Lin
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I really liked teh first chapter, but the second..i'm not really beleiving it. It seems like she would be a bit more conflicted not just offer her services right away. Also she seems to be for lack of a better word...a minion. I just don't see buffy being subservient to anyone...or atleast putting up a fight to up her status..unless she's scamming the big bad for something to work in her favor...which if it is i would like to hear a bit of buffys inner workings..
Eh, just seems a bit rushed and all that...
Either way the idea is good enough that i'll probably keep reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I was having some problems with the second chapter and didn't make a few things clear that I meant to. I will be making a few changes to both chapters. Thanx for reading.
Review By [Lin] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Fantom" from CPTSkip
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Wow! You would think Buffy was channaling Dark Faith here. For some reason, I am enjoying Dark Buffy, sorry, Dark Elizabeth. I hope you continue this interesting story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Not Rated
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