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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Zari
Review:
Very nicely done. I'm fairly new to the Anita Blake series, but I've read enough of both it and fan fiction to truly enjoy this story. It was brilliantly done. The perfect mixture of the two verses. I also love the "Merging" that you mentioned and how well you handled that. I like that Buffy was so broken but healing without even realizing the latter, too. Another nice touch was the way the pairings worked out. The fact that everyone was reasonably content or happy at the end and that things really had the chance to work out for the best.

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it greatly.

Zari
Review By [Zari] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Thank you! It was a very wonderful story.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Rising" from spk
Review:
I'm just re-reading this story and ran into some confusion. Anita remarks about Caleb touching the vampire marks on Buffy's neck that she sometimes absentmindedly rubs...but at the beginning of this story, you mentioned that all of Buffy's scars had been left in the grave, including Angel's bite mark? What vampire mark does Anita see? :)
Comments from author:
Eeep, better late than never, huh?

If you want the PR version: Spike's marks, given to her after her resurrection. If you want the truth, I wrote the first couple of chapters, stopped working on the story for almost a year and then got back to it. I simply forgot about the no-scars bit. But don't tell! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonelf
Review:
Very good story.

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the hedgehog knows one big thing.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Marvelous!

Thank you for this story, and the enjoyment I had reading it.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eyes Closed" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Truly wonderful chapter!

Well done!

*claps heartily until his palms sting*
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Floor" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Yes, I'm satisfied!

*sits back, looks content for a few seconds*

Huh, I do satisfied as well as you do content! ;p
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tell No Tale" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Wow!

Buffy's sppech/tirade to the SHA was just... stirring.

And see last review for comments on your so-called innocent looks.

Good chapter!!
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dead Men" from MountainWilliam
Review:
"*whistles innocently* Who, me?"

Ha! You couldn't carry an innocent look in a bucket, girl!! lol

And you do the stereotypical small town sheriff very well. Sure you've never been to the South?
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Touch Again" from MountainWilliam
Review:
"Can you guess the worst case scenario?"

Sure, but since I'm a psychotic, I won't even hint at the shuddery details. ;)

And how dare you say this chapter doesn't have plot!?
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Sacred Place" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Verrrrrrrry good chapter!

You handle the changing points of view so well, really making it flow seamlessly.

And I loved the leopards showing Buffy their 'special'. Very touching.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Known Songs" from MountainWilliam
Review:
"...a lot of the time she was the only thing standing between herself and her happiness."

Trues words were never spoken. Very Zen of you.

Good chapter, as always. I'll have to pass on the contest, for obvious reasons.
;)
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be That Way" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Ah, Micah should have let Buffy threaten to bite the guy's balls off.

You're no fun! hehehehehehe

Fantastic chapter!

And, OMG, you're a Brit, right? Only Brits use 'knackered'.

I lived in UK a year when I was 15, *mumble mumble* years ago. On an RAF base, too, while my dad was doing exchange service (he was USAF, a fighter pilot).
Comments from author:
I'm German. I pick whatever words I like best from both British and American. Although the British tends to win, since it's closer and I've actually been there.

And thank you for reviewing.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Rising" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Well, that was... intense.

Methinks Anita is going to need a new coffee table, soon.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Simple Things" from MountainWilliam
Review:
How is Anita getting her head screwed on straight a 'simple thing'?

Good chapter, can't wait for the next!

Oh, right... it's only three clicks away.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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