Very nicely done. I'm fairly new to the Anita Blake series, but I've read enough of both it and fan fiction to truly enjoy this story. It was brilliantly done. The perfect mixture of the two verses. I also love the "Merging" that you mentioned and how well you handled that. I like that Buffy was so broken but healing without even realizing the latter, too. Another nice touch was the way the pairings worked out. The fact that everyone was reasonably content or happy at the end and that things really had the chance to work out for the best.
Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it greatly.
Zari
Review By [Zari] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm just re-reading this story and ran into some confusion. Anita remarks about Caleb touching the vampire marks on Buffy's neck that she sometimes absentmindedly rubs...but at the beginning of this story, you mentioned that all of Buffy's scars had been left in the grave, including Angel's bite mark? What vampire mark does Anita see? :)
Comments from author:
Eeep, better late than never, huh?
If you want the PR version: Spike's marks, given to her after her resurrection. If you want the truth, I wrote the first couple of chapters, stopped working on the story for almost a year and then got back to it. I simply forgot about the no-scars bit. But don't tell! :)
Ah, Micah should have let Buffy threaten to bite the guy's balls off.
You're no fun! hehehehehehe
Fantastic chapter!
And, OMG, you're a Brit, right? Only Brits use 'knackered'.
I lived in UK a year when I was 15, *mumble mumble* years ago. On an RAF base, too, while my dad was doing exchange service (he was USAF, a fighter pilot).
Comments from author:
I'm German. I pick whatever words I like best from both British and American. Although the British tends to win, since it's closer and I've actually been there.
And thank you for reviewing.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]