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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from clarityfades
Review:
I re-read this story every couple of months. & every time I love it as much as, if not more than, the first time. :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I really enjoyed this story (and the entire series). It was very well-written.

If I have a quibble with it, it's that I'm not really sure I ever managed to buy Buffy as the same level of sociopath as Edward. Also, while I certainly liked the way you resolved the shiniest characters (Asher and Richard), that part felt a bit Mary Sue to me.

Otherwise, though, really strong stuff. Better than a lot of the recent Anita novels.
Comments from author:
Ah, but that's the thing. Buffy and Edward think of Buffy as a sociopath, but she really isn't. She wouldn't end up where she does, if she were. It's a limited PoV.

As for the Mary Sue stuff, yeah. I cringe at how I resolved that when I read it now, but, alas, sins of the youth.

I'm glad you enjoyed the series despite the hitches and thank you very much. :)

Cheers!
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Knocking" from breve
Review:
Edward's here, finally :)
Review By [breve] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Absence of Light" from breve
Review:
I love what you did to Asher!
I'm really enjoying reading this version of Buffy.
I didn't want to read this story because I don't like Anita Blake, but a friend recommended it and now I'm hooked.
Review By [breve] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Anglachel
Review:
Hi
I really love this piece, I love how you show Buffy´s fragile humanity cracking through her armor, just in tiny glimpses of a moment, and how you portray the ephemeral glow Buffy has when she is at her best, (and when the show was at it's best). A shame that Buffy seemed to forget that about herself. I guess it is a huge compliment to Micah that he sees it so clearly
Review By [Anglachel] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Wrytergrrrl
Review:
I'm so sad this story is over because I LOVED it. It was beautiful and sad and hopeful all at the same time. I'm really impressed by where you took the plot and how you intertwined the Buffy universe with the Anita Blake one (even if it was mostly Anita Blake characters). Brava!
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from KestralWatcher
Review:
I realized after I wrote the review that I meant P&P's companion peices that weren't in 1st person POV. It was getting late, sorry!
Comments from author:
No problem.

Cheers.
Review By [KestralWatcher] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from KestralWatcher
Review:
Lovely. I like how you mixed bits of action in with the over-arching character development plotline.

Also, I could tell that your sense of individual POV has improved greatly over the course of this piece. (You bounced around in heads a lot in Purge and Pray.) Excellent work.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like my stories and thanks for all those reviews.

To answer your earlier question, Old Soldiers is set where the sequence of the series implies, after Buffy leaves Dawn and sometime before Lunar. As for Purge and Pray, well, that's a lot newer than Lunar, so not really a development, besides, P&P is all written in Anita's first person POV, so there's only her jumping around to account for, in the end.

Thanks again.
Cheers.
Review By [KestralWatcher] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Zari
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Very nicely done. I'm fairly new to the Anita Blake series, but I've read enough of both it and fan fiction to truly enjoy this story. It was brilliantly done. The perfect mixture of the two verses. I also love the "Merging" that you mentioned and how well you handled that. I like that Buffy was so broken but healing without even realizing the latter, too. Another nice touch was the way the pairings worked out. The fact that everyone was reasonably content or happy at the end and that things really had the chance to work out for the best.

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it greatly.

Zari
Review By [Zari] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Thank you! It was a very wonderful story.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Rising" from spk
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I'm just re-reading this story and ran into some confusion. Anita remarks about Caleb touching the vampire marks on Buffy's neck that she sometimes absentmindedly rubs...but at the beginning of this story, you mentioned that all of Buffy's scars had been left in the grave, including Angel's bite mark? What vampire mark does Anita see? :)
Comments from author:
Eeep, better late than never, huh?

If you want the PR version: Spike's marks, given to her after her resurrection. If you want the truth, I wrote the first couple of chapters, stopped working on the story for almost a year and then got back to it. I simply forgot about the no-scars bit. But don't tell! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonelf
Review:
Very good story.

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MountainWilliam
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Marvelous!

Thank you for this story, and the enjoyment I had reading it.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eyes Closed" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Truly wonderful chapter!

Well done!

*claps heartily until his palms sting*
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Floor" from MountainWilliam
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Yes, I'm satisfied!

*sits back, looks content for a few seconds*

Huh, I do satisfied as well as you do content! ;p
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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