Review of chapter "Predators and Prey" from Sulien
Freaking fantabulous! You had the canon characters in voice and your original characters were well written and believable. Your writing is nice and tight, and without any of the usual grammatical errors. I'm looking forward to reading more of the goodies you have posted here. :-)
Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated