Can you please add a few more chaps to this wonderful story, I found out you added one after I read it and the lead up to what I think is going to be the best part of this fic really needs writing. I really wish you would finish this one off.
david
Review By [Razial] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
... Kinky. Some of these things wig me out a bit, but over all, kinda funny. Lacking in actual substance though, but then again, that wasn't really the point, was it?
Review By [LordSia] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I remember reading the beginning of this story, or maybe chapters one though five-six-ish and thinking "This is pretty awesome, and amazingly kinky despite (or because of?) the lack of smut" and then you stopped. Granted, it's already been since July, so three months again, but I'd be thrilled to see more of this if you ever get around to it.
One of the more interesting points is that Felicia is a (ex-?)member of the Brotherhood. It's frequently depicted as just as much of a half-way house for stray mutants with a really big chip (or not so big) as a Terrorist/Military organization, and yet no one that I've seen has done anything with the 'regular people that happen to be mutants' angle that could be exploited to so many different ends. I like that part a lot.
I also, being a fan of Faith, approve her inclusion whole heartedly. Good stuff. =D
So in summation, great story, needs more attention, really looking forward to whenever you get around to it.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This is turning into one of my favorite 'JH stories'. Tara was always one of my favorite characters on BtVS and you do as good a job with her as you do with Cordy in so many of your stories. Not to mention, I always thought Tara was hot. The idea of Xander getting two for the price of one just tickles my fantasy. I look forward to more Tara-squared-goodness.
Comments from author:
Mmmmm. Tara squared...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Thanks for entertaining my request. I wish I had Tara and VampWillow in my room right now! ...just checking. Anyway, this was an interesting chapter. We didn't see so much of Dominant Tara, because Felicia is obviously much more assured and experienced, but we saw a bit. Xander agreed to Tara's idea, so that's good. The part with Tara and Felicia was a bit a boring - I'm not that interested in trading clothes, obviously - but it was also somewhat cool, and the idea that Tara can now dress Willow in VampWillow clothes make me the name of the chapter, even in the air conditioning. I wonder if she'll be able to breathe though... Will Tara tell Willow how he got the clothes? Because it seems to me Willow will ask, and I wonder how she'll take it... then again, if she takes it badly, she might be punished! The idea of a club half-an-hour down the coast was also interesting. I hope we'll see more soon. Thanks again, and until then, Meneldur.
Comments from author:
It was more about Tara and Felicia bonding and turning out to operate on similar wavelengths than anything else. Who knows, X/Felicia/T might be the permanent end pairing.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
