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Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from CronosKitty
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Since its been 6 years I expect there will be no more of the story. I really enjoyed the story and wish you hadn't abandoned it. Same goes for Inevitable. Another good one that was abandoned. I hate it when such good writing goes to waste. What I feel like when something goes unfinished. Wishing there was more...
Review By [CronosKitty] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Netchka
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Looking forward to more chapters. :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Xayian
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Dude, I seriously could reread this forever. You really have a knack for *really* bringing life to the characters. (Please tell me you have some original work I could read?) And thank you for helping me stay with the liking that is Anita Blake. I dont know where LKH was going with her, but I feel like she's destroying the character. (Sadly, she did say Anita started as a reflection of herself. Doesn't that say a lot?) Anyway, absolutely love your rendering of her through Dawn's eyes and thanks so much for keeping the substance of the characters true. I think I'd still be reading AB if you were writing it. Who knows, I may go back to see if LKH has started writing more plot based stories.

Here's to hoping this isn't the end. :0)
Review By [Xayian] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from Starfox
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Beautiful story. I read it all in one go, skipping a meal. I hope you'll continue it one day.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Callista
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Hi,

great story, I really hope you'll come back to it one day...

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from julz
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I love that you finished part one.
I love that you made it a part one, I am looking foreward to part two
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more,
You make me laugh outloud with the character of young dawn and she is true and real and I love all of your characters
I love the glimpses you can see in other characters using Dawns hearing, but you don't use it like a crutch.
You are a fantastic author and if you are now writing and getting paid for it I would not be surprised at all
I love your characters in this story please write more
Review By [julz] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Xayian
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Okay, so it seems i have this problem where I just can't stop reading this story! I.e. this being the 3rd or 4th time through. :)

The pleasure of it is never ending I tell you!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from maxthehobbit
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This is so funny, no one could ever think as pessimistically as Dawn does in this story. It appears you gave up on this story long ago and leaving a story as long as you have, there is no hope of you ever coming back to it ... seems to happen to about half the stories on this site.
Thanks for posting what you wrote, better than not posting at all.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Almadynis
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I love this. I hope you continue.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from yakuit
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ohhh I luvvvvvv this story... any chance you will write more ...puppy dog eyes.
I know its rude to ask... but hey I am desperate
Review By [yakuit] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from borgrabbit
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Haiku dirge:

Shame the story's dead
Be nice to see where it led
Your muse—has it fled
┌☺-☻-☺-☻-☺-☻┐
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from smolder
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Just re-read this fic for the third or maybe forth time. Still one of the most enthralling stories I've read on this site and the one that made me start to see Dawn as a really fascinating and strong character. I know it's been a while since you've worked with this, but I just wanted to thank you for writing it in the first place. Big love and hugs to the story and the author. :)
Review By [smolder] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from leelaa
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(Micah:) "What have we told you about climbing up onto things?"
(Dawn:) "That even someone as cute as me is susceptible to gravity and that I might hurt myself?"
"Something like that." Micah accepted the cushion from Dawn. "And do you know why we tell you that?"
Dawn scrunched up her nose to think. "Because skulls weren't built to bounce?"
~
Superb. I really hope that writing block dissolves and the muses smile on this fic at some point. Until then, rereading this fic again and again. Thanks for a great read everytime. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Taryn
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Ooohh I hope you continue this. I love this series. Good work!
Review By [Taryn] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from yakuit
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Let me sing you a love song

About what I feel in my heart;

You're a flower in bloom.

In the dark, in the gloom,

It's you who brightens my day.

How many ways do I need you?

Every day, every way, come what may.
..................................................

Happy valentine
I luv your story
Review By [yakuit] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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