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Review of chapter "Remebering" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Worth continuing. I can see Giles or another rep of the council coming and instead of being mouthy to him -- just being very quiet and following directions... at first...then taking the initiatve when she knows something better or as well as her watcher(s).
Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm toying with the idea of demolishing cannon enough that Wesley can be her watcher. Maybe.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remebering" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm loving this story so far. Some of your slips into first person POV (which seem as if they're meant to be Buffy's thoughts) don't flow all that well with the story- you might want to use a stylistic marker (or at least start a new paragraph) to set them apart from the third person parts of it.

I love that Buffy has a new life and every time I read the phrase "Wakefield Triplets," I start cracking up. I hope you update soon. This is definitely worth continuing. I'm interested to see where "Brianna" fits in with her sisters- Elizabeth and Jessica were always such polar opposites that it's funny to think where a third sister might fit in.
Comments from author:
Fixed it, thanks for pointing that out. I tend to forget that when I do italics and stuff in word, I still need the markers to make it work here.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
And here I thought I was the only one who wrote Buffy/Sweet Valley crossovers.

This is a brilliant idea. I wish, however, that you'd kept Buffy's name as "Buffy" (though perhaps Buffy is the nickname they use for Brianna?), just for the purpose of clarity.

Anyway, I'm excited to read this fic. Brilliant idea!
Comments from author:
She will end up with 'Buffy' as a nickname, but really for her name. :) It won't come for a while thought. Glad you like.

EDIT: Actually, no, she won't get that nickname. I remember now the reason I changed her name. Buffy is usually short for Elizabeth (though not in this Buffy's case) and I didn't want her name to be that close to her "sister's."
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
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