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Review of chapter "Not a chapter/Author's Note" from QueenCobra
Review:
Ah man. I found this series on FF.net and finished 'I Wish Upon a Star', so hoping I could find a continuation somewhere else I searched and found the series here. I see this is another part of the series though it's uncompleted and in the process of being rewritten, but at least I found more to the series so yay! Haha.

Love this series! It's just so wonderful to read how you blended Max and Alec seamlessly into Cordelia and Xander's characters. Cordelia always was a snarky, sexy, badass like Max, and Xander has always been a smart aleck and since Alec was named for the same reason there you go. So, even though Cordelia and Xander have been upgraded they are still themselves but more so and that's always nice to read. Also, love Cordelia/Xander AND Max/Alec pairing so win, win! Lol.

Oh, and Xander being a son of John Winchester? LOVE! Cannot wait to see where that goes and if he gets to meet Dean and Sam.

I hope to see an update soon, but I know how it is with writer's block. I'll be on a look-out for an update.

So, again, love this series. ♥
Review By [QueenCobra] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not a chapter/Author's Note" from dabraning
Review:
this is by far the best Dark Angel/Buffyverse X-over, I see you have not updated since May 09, are you still writing and if so do you plan to re-visit this seris?
Review By [dabraning] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not a chapter/Author's Note" from Saranel
Review:
I've just finished reading the whole series and really loved it, I'd love to see whatever you manage in this series. I did wonder if you had started rewriting it because in the prologue Zack goes with Giles to help find Daniel and in the rest of the story he stays in Sunnydale while Giles has a bad quickening I think. I can't decide which of the two I like more although it will be whichever you write. Anyway I love all the stories!
Comments from author:
I apologize, yes, I've been going back and rewriting the stories. Please be patient, I'm still working on it.

And, please, if anybody, even you, finds a typo, a mistake, a continuity error, please please please let me know so that I can correct those errors. I hate mistakes.

Thanks again for reading.
Review By [Saranel] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not a chapter/Author's Note" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Ah, finally finished all the stories in this verse. I really like what you've established here; even the slow build up of other crossovers is working out well. Gotta say, though, that this last story doesn't make a lot of sense. How did Zack go from being with Giles on his trip to back with the gang? What happened when Xander met John? These things got forgotten or re-written it seems... hope you still have plans to finish this. I'd like to see what happens when the Initiative comes to town with the X's around, and, personally I think keeping Zack (any maaaybe the others in their unit) around would make things interesting. Even Joshua and the others- a place like Sunnydale or LA would be perfect for the Nomlies to live in.
Comments from author:
AlecMcDowell wrote...

>>> Ah, finally finished all the stories in this verse.

Not quite, but still working on it.

>>> How did Zack go from being with Giles on his trip to back with the gang?

Yes, I'm sorry, this specific story is still a work in progress, so there are some bugs I still have to fix. I'm going to work on that soon... I promise.

>>> What happened when Xander met John?

I'm still working on this portion. I've run through several drafts that I haven't been happy with. All I can ask is that you please be patient with me.

>>> I'd like to see what happens when the Initiative comes to town with the X's around

*Evil grin* We'll I'm not up to that point... yet.

>>> personally I think keeping Zack (any maaaybe the others in their unit) around would make things interesting.

X5-599 is going to mature, grow up, and be a better person, he just has to learn a few things before that can happen.

>>> Even Joshua and the others- a place like Sunnydale or LA would be perfect for the Nomlies to live in.

There are a few X-5s that I love, and miss. there are also a few Nomlies that I love and I'm hoping I can include them.

I'm looking forward to getting back to writing soon.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from richardo
Review:
This is still a good read. I wish that you could maybe finish it some time, maybe a new story or three? Hope to see some more.
Comments from author:
Thanks... I want to finish it too. Hopefully soon.
Review By [richardo] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from banditobane
Review:
This series is awesome, I wish that you'd continue because this is an amazing story. Also I'd to see what you had in mind of how this team of Scoobies deal with Kakotos, The Mayor, and the Initiative. Please, plsase, continue, I want to know how the get the G-Man back.
Comments from author:
Thanks, yeah I do want to get back to this series... I don't know when. I've had a bout of writer's block for a bit.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from banner
Review:
I just found this series, and I've read it straight through. I've been riveted. You've done a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character while allowing them to learn and grow. I hope your muse leads you back here...
Comments from author:
I have some thoughts on continuing, I have to write them out in pen and paper first before I sit at the computer. Also, I have a jumble of 5 stories in my head at the moment so I have to sift through what's what.

Thanks for reading.
Review By [banner] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Wonderful series, thank you.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoy the series as much as I enjoy writing it.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from grd
Review:
Just recently discovered this excellent series of stories. Loving it alot. Please continue as your characterizations are outstanding.
Comments from author:
At the moment, I'm going back and editing the stories. I've found some typos and such so I'm fixing that. On the latest story in this series, I'm in the process now of writing the next two chapters.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoy them.
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Ladeia
Review:
Hope to see more of this soon. :( It's been too long since the last update.
Comments from author:
Thanks for writing. I'm in the process of editing my stories and I'm also writing two new chapters at the moment for the most recent story in the series.

I always enjoy hearing from my readers, specially the ones who inspired me to write in the first place. ;o)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from purrfus
Review:
Nice to see Adam back. Definitely want to see what happens with Zack.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. I'm still updating the other stories. And, I'm in the process of writing the next two chapters of this story.

Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoy reading the stories as much as I enjoy writing them.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
I am pleased to see that the story is continuing, and I hope the update intervals pick up. Keep it coming.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.

VC
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DarthSephiroth
Review:
Is Sandoval from Earth Final Conflict?
Comments from author:
Agent Ronald Sandoval (Von Flores) is from Earth Final Conflict.

Agent Richard Sandoval (Fulvio Cecere) is from Dark Angel... okay... so I have to make a few corrections. Anyway... Alternate Universe... totally different person with the same name. Hmn, I wonder what will happen when/if Xander meets him.
Review By [DarthSephiroth] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
The chapter is a fine continuation of the story, but there are a couple of things I noticed.

First was a typo, "Sandoval said and waited." "Said" was probably meant to be "sat."

Second was that the story "confirms" a single religion as True with others False with the church scenes. There was something similar with another installment of the series with the Hindu cult trying to end the world ...

Basically, my problem is that a value judgments are made of Hinduism and Christianity through the portrayal of the religions in this story series. That alienates readers who do not subscribe to beliefs directly in line with the author. Particularly since Hinduism is not a dead religion, and Christianity is not the only religion of the readership. I would greatly prefer a more ambiguous role of Jesus and whatnot. With the current role of religion in the story, my interest as a reader is waning.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the correction of the typo, I went back and changed it.

Okay, I can understand your point of view about religion... and you're probably right.

I'm gonna go back and write ambiguous... which I hate to do. But there is a reason that they are "talking" with the Universal Being.

I don't believe that one faith is the right faith.

I'm not trying to alienate anyone, offend anyone or say what faith is the correct path... as more than anything religion is a very tricky subject.

VC
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
Very cute chapter. I liked the resurgence of humor in this one. I'm patiently awaiting more chapters that are related to the main plot.
Comments from author:
Yes, I know, just be patient... I did say there would be a lot of dialogue before everything else... should start back on track soon.

Thanks for reading.

VC
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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