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Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sigh, another good one that failed to update... The muses are too cruel!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
A good start that need more chapters.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from ConDaMon
Review:
I really enjoyed the story hopefully you will be able to finish it eventually
Review By [ConDaMon] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a good job with this story so far and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to it.

::Gives the plot bunny some Smörgåstårta (Sandwich cake)::

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When dealing with the insane, the
best method is to pretend to be sane.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from Loatroll
Review:
Interesting stuff.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [23 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from Nomma
Review:
Very good. Never read a Xander/Magick pairing before.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've always loved Magick and wanted to pair up Xander with someone that I thought would be good for him.
Review By [Nomma] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from RevDorothyL
Review:
Just a few of the typos I noticed, in case you have time to fiddle with them:

‘...then she'll never some magic protection’ [‘never’ should be ‘need’, probably?]

‘A huge [what? word missing here] sat in the middle of its forehead...’

‘...elegant dress could be seen of [the] sitting figure.’ [missing definite article there]

“I will be most... unpleased," [is ‘unpleased’ instead of the more grammatical ‘displeased’ intentional, for effect?]
Comments from author:
d'oh! ~looks and curses at evil grammar gremlins~ Thanks, I've made the changes. heh, sleep deprivation makes me spell and write poorly.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the update you posted, you have about two mistakes though. I hope to read more very soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flavor of the week..." from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Free Falling" from setebos
Review:
great I was afraid the first magik/xander fic I found in a long while was dead

good job
Comments from author:
thanks. the fics not dead, just work-in-progres...or is that work-if-time? W.i.t. ?
Review By [setebos] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exit stage left?" from banner
Review:
This is an interesting and fun setup. I especially enjoy seeing a savvy Faith. The banter is funny. Good job so far.
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exit stage left?" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Never apologize for your kids taking your time. They come first. I am in awe of anyone with two children who is disciplined enough to keep posting. I don't even have that excuse and I can't keep up.

That said, I also really like your story. I am looking forward to reading more whenever you have time to post! little quibbles about rental cars vs work trucks, but minor.

Brava!

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [29 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Exit stage left?" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Exit stage left?" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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