I love your story. You should update it, 'cause then I could keep reading it. And if I can keep reading it I can continue reviewing it. Sorry, babbling. Just please update.
Review By [SlytherinWere] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
very cool start.. i can't wait to see where this could be headed.. So JD's 'Pale Knee' (Willow) is at the hospital for Dawn and this is where situtations can get down right akward.
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [31 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Okay not a bad start, you've got a nice plot line developing there.
While I'm reading the JD parts I can almost hear his voice but...but sometimes you seem to lose it and it just doesn't sound right. Keep trying and I'm sure it'll get better.
As I say not bad but there's room for improvement (I say that about my own fics so who am I to talk!). Keep plugging away and I'll be looking out for part 2.
All The best, Dave T.
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Not Rated
What I read, I liked. But I still have no idea of what is really going on. I hope you write more as your story seems to have a lot of potential and I want to find out what it going on.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated