Review of chapter "Chase" from BarbarossaRotbart
Interesting first chapter, but making it a triple crossover was IMHO a mistake, because it derails from the interesting plot introduced in the first chapter. If you ever continue this story, keep it a BtVS/DCU crossover.
Comments from author:
Thanks. You're right. I made it a triple cross for several formatting reasons involving FFA's and the lack of written dialogue giving me a chance to bring Joyce back to Sunnydale pretty much unchanged and end on a punchline.
Regardless of whether I finish that up, I do plan on eventually posting the Joyce-and-Bruce-heavy first chapter again as a separate story, credit you, and write an alternate story going on from there without Spiderman-based FFA's where there's no guarantee of her making it home and they, y'know, actually talk.
Forgotten Life: The Long Road to Gotham and Forgotten Life: Pulled Sideways sound good as first thoughts. Any ideas for where I should take the plot?
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart
] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chase" from jessie
Interesting so far, is there more?
Review By [jessie
] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chase" from VeltaIO
Definitely an intersting if confusing beginning and I am looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [VeltaIO
] • Date [23 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chase" from JediKnight
Nice work so far, please add your next chapter as soon as you're able to
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [23 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chase" from Gaeriel
Interesting and has a lot of potential. I found the entire narrative style too confusing to get much out of it though.
Review By [Gaeriel
] • Date [22 Aug 06] • Not Rated