Review of chapter "Chapter One" from marajaded
Funny but Dawn with kryptonite in her? I guess that'd help explain how the monk's spell was so powerful.
Review By [marajaded
] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from christytrekkie
oh my lol
Review By [christytrekkie
] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
Oh, poor Dawn and clark!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii
] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
The key is kryponite to Clark, but how AUey do you get with both Lana and Cloe being taken (even for a short time) from Smallville. Interesting, but raises some questions.
Comments from author:
It's my belief that after god only knows how many times they have been kidnapped, stalked, or their lives were threatened the PTB's would finally say "THAT"S ENOUGH!!! We are not gonna let one of Earths Champions spend all his time saving your sorry buts. Here. Be Slayers. Take care of yourselves!"
The Universe has decided to make them stand up and take charge. Or so I would like to think.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Granting the twenty minutes - the story is good, the wording sharp and concise - but the ending? I'm guessing it is Clark, but it could be the newest meteor mutant.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KarlStahl
Good work for twenty minutes. I like your story. The end is a little unclear, though.
Review By [KarlStahl
] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]