Brilliant story. Loved the way you write. However...
...you really need to make sure to make a series of Here Kitty, Kitty and Bad Kitty, Kitty. I read the Bad first and was slightly confused.
If there was more from this universe, I wouldn't be disappointed.
James
Comments from author:
i know but couldn't find out how to make a series after it was posted (to tell the truth I was never completely happy with Bad Kitty Kitty) ... if I ever think of a new story I'll try to get it sorted as a series.
Review By [James] • Date [19 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 - Bill to the rescue (Vol 2)" from James
Review:
Love this story. I only have one quibble in this chapter. As a resident of SunnyHell, Willow would NEVER invite anyone into the house, even if professor did jump up on him and lick him enthusiastically (SNORT!) . Especially if it was dark or near dark outside.
James
Comments from author:
good point .... damn I missed that one .....
Review By [James] • Date [19 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very very cute. Interesting points of view, and Buffy's fish obsession was fun.
Comments from author:
thanks - glad you enjoyed it - poor Buffy - she was easily distracted as nothing really impacted on her - nothing to protect or slay so she really didn't have much else to do!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Overall, that was great. The only real criticism I have is that I think you overplayed the buffy-dumb-blonde bit in the last few chapters. Oh, that and the fact Minerva never wreaked a suitable magic vengeance on Spike for the poker ;)
Comments from author:
aaww I didnt see Buffy as a dumb blonde, rather a junior marine psychologist.
And Minerva's magic didn't work on the hellmouth, nevermind the fact that she was in a hurry to get home to see what her "potion" could do.
Other than that i'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm playing with a title, Bad Kitty Kitty, for a kinda sequal thingy, so ya never know, Spike might get his just deserts yet ...... or not ...
Thank you for sharing this story, it was a lot of fun. :-D I especially enjoyed getting things from Professor McGonagall's "cat perspective". I'm owned by a lovable, furry little terrorist, and he does a pretty good job of communicating most of the time.
P.S. If you'd like a beta reader to help with sentence structure and such like I'd be happy to volunteer. :-)
Comments from author:
when it comes to communicating, Rusty's vocabulary consists of food, food and food - if I find any challenges that i like, or think i can do justice to i'll give you a shout :D
i hope you will consider a followup fic in the future.
Comments from author:
thank you for that - if I can figure out how to do it and keep it plausible a follow up could be done, but at the moment I have absolutely no ideas .......
Review By [Laith] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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