Just wanted to mention how much I liked this story. You did a great job integrating a whole backstory into a few comments and explanations - gave an excellent gesture to an entire untold history that made this little vignette feel alive.
Review By [solidstate] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Not Rated
I know that you are probably busy with other stories, but I think this one deserves some elaboration. i love the premise, could you expand on it a little?
When I got to this line:: “You were made out of Buffy. But where do you think you got those cheekbones and baby blues from? Angel? Come home with me, Dawnie. There’s no deal important enough to give up family.”
I actually started to tear up a little. Thank you for your wonderful stories.
Review By [WatchMeFly] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
ooh! I'm going to be obnoxious girl- two typos! one- 'hare' instead of 'are.' two- 'no' instead of 'now.' (I don't remember where the first one was, but the second one was near the end with Dawn talking to Oz.
Review By [TheStatue] • Date [29 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Heh, I liked this. (Even if it implies a spuffy- my prejudices are showing through there, I guess!) Oz is by far one of my favorite characters and I could EASILY see him driving someone like Jason up the wall!
Review By [TheStatue] • Date [29 Jul 06] • Not Rated