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Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Obsidian
Review:
BRAVO!! BRAVO!! I LOVE IT! thank you.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [18 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from GundumM
Review:
loved it. better then the last act. you need to add an act 3 to focus on the other scoobies
Review By [GundumM] • Date [1 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome story.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [28 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Dragonelf
Review:
Good story and I am looking forward to read the sequel to this story.

::Feeds the plot bunny::



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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
darkness, and stands between darkness and light.
-- Leonardo da Vinci
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from APS
Review:
My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Well done, a fitting end to Book2 although I worry that a gift from A Dark Lord is never of the good. Looking forward to the sequel.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from neverwill
Review:
I loved this story as there arent' that any Honor-verse crossovers available. Is one of the visions for the future a manic Xander having to cater to three, strong-willed, PREGNANT wives and the associated craziness that usually happens around him?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from CPTSkip
Review:
Sorry this is a bit late, but I just had to reread your whole story because I have loved it from the first update I read. I thought your ending felt a bit rushed, but if there is going to be a sequel, then everything is good. While I enjoyed reading your alternate Honorverse, the plot changes were neat, but the best thing about your story was the outstanding characterizations. Xander, the other Scoobies, the Firefliers, and the Honorverse characters all came across as very true to their canon originals. Your dialog was also often very funny. I hope your life gets a whole lot brighter and you feel like writing lots more of this wonderful series.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Tjin
Review:
I love this universe... PLEASE let me see more... pretty please?

Thanks for amusing story.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from YademosEbyam
Review:
I don't give tens, but if I did there is a good chance you'd get one. Turning over St. Just as a peace offering was a brilliant move (much better than the ones I considered in my Nov 27 2007 review), and probably the only one that could have ended the war quickly enough to save the Republic. They still have a joker in the deck however, and if Mesa plays him right the road to good relations could be a bumpy one.

To quote from the above mentioned review, "On a side note, one way to make Serenity fit the Honorverse better would be to make Simon and River "genies"; not slaves, but "designer kids" sold to a rich couple as part of a long term experiment. Blue Sun (a wholly owned subsidiary of Manpower) ran the Academy together with the Solarian OFS (Office of Frontier Security) which recently put down a fringe sector rebellion called (at least locally) the Unification War. ;)" In addition, River's rescue could have been backed by the Audubon Ballroom (she always did love to dance) giving Simon reasons to know Cathy Montaigne and Jeremy X. It would be interesting to see how the "Crown of Slaves" plot would pan out if the Scoobies were involved.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment.

I figured that Theisman was wanting to preserve the Republic. He is and always was, a patriot. He saw the best way to preserve the Republic was to surrender and cease all hostilities. The best way to get that outcome was to give the Alliance something in return. St. Just orchestrated many plots against Manticore, including the latest assassination attempt. It also might make Elizabeth a little more receptive to restructure Haven, rather than destory it.

I am rereading the Honorverse, so I will be working out how things change in the Knightverse, I guess I should call it. THis is a concept I think I will use, thank you. There are other reasons for using that concept that will become clear later.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I am so glad to see this story again! I love Xander as a Harrington!
Comments from author:
I am glad to have it finished. Now I feel better about wanting to go on to see what other trouble I caan get Xander Harrington into.

I like him as a Harrington as well, one of the reasons I started this story.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from ghostwhowalks
Review:
I enjoyed it a great deal and I'm sorry to see you end it.
Thank you for your story and the time and dedication it takes to see it to the end.

Ghost who Walks
Bob
Comments from author:
Thanks. That means a lot.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from LordCorwin
Review:
WHAT! ... THAT'S IT! .. come on ... I wanted a little more drama between Death/Evil/Buffy/ And the other Mysterious figures in the background ... Fate, Time, Mother Nature .... hmm ... Oh yeah .. and WAR! ... Of course, where's Orb (God) too ... hmmm ...

Other than that .. my only comment, it ended rather abruptly ... I certainly HOPE there's going to be another one.
Comments from author:
there will be more. It was more or less that I needed to finish this story. It wasn't everything I wanted, but it is my first real story that I have finished.

I do have something planned or the future.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from grd
Review:
Outstanding! I look forward to the sequel you have planned. Thank you for a memorable ride.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Working on the sequel.
Review By [grd] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Endings and Beginnings" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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