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Review of chapter "Urgo's Ultimatum" from Geyer
Review:
How nice to see an update on this story. It's a cute premise with some of my favorite characters, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Urgo's Ultimatum" from RevDorothyL
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Consider yourself encouraged! I'm so glad you returned to this, and I'm kind of mad at Urgo for trying to use Spike against Buffy as a means of preserving himself (even if he DID bring Daniel and Buffy together).
Comments from author:
Thank you. As far as Urgo using Spike against Buffy, he hasn't yet, he was just panicked and wanting to save himself so he blurted out the first thing he could think of to try and get his way. He has a history of lying when panicked so I had him lie. Though he is thinking about doing that for leverage. I am not sure if he is ever going to get farther than lying and thinking about it though.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Urgo's Ultimatum" from Kalliza
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I'm glad to see this get updated. I thought it was dead. I particularly like how Urgo just dropped that Daniel had been in Heaven with Buffy. Looking forward to the next update!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Urgo's Ultimatum" from ebony
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Urgo is a sweetheart really he is and I know he is lonely but god is he annoying in his quest for fun. If only he would learn to ask first.
Review By [ebony] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ethan's Revenge." from AstridWinchester
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Oh wow, I can't believe you mixed these two! I love that stargate epi, my brother and I quote it ALL THE TIME! lol Awesomeness! I bow before you lol
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath and Invitations" from ebony
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I am really going to need you to finish this story because when these two worlds collide sparks will fly.
Review By [ebony] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath and Invitations" from Emeraldfire
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I wish you would continue this soon! It was hysterical!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath and Invitations" from bluebird
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Love it! Mosquitoes... Hilarious!! This is still one of my favorite stories! Keep it up!
Bluebird
Review By [bluebird] • Date [19 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath and Invitations" from bluebird
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Hey there, another home run! Very enjoyable. I always enjoy reading what you have come up with and look fore-ward to seeing where we go from here. I love Spike but the love triangle with Buffy, Spike and Daniel is great. I have to admit that I am routing for Daniel though. He is such a cutie! Besides, Buffy never hooked up with him in the TV show. Now is her chance.
Review By [bluebird] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath and Invitations" from RevDorothyL
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Jack's complaint about the pie-eating reminds me (uncomfortably) of my Thanksgiving over-indulgences last week. Thanks for updating, and I'm enjoying the growing complications, as well as the fact that SG-1 is beginning to realize at least the Urgo part of what's going on (though Slayer business is still beyond their ken).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Matchmaking and Binge Eating" from Keshkreature
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lol, hilarious! Everyone just "happened" to vacation in 'ole Sunnyhell. I can't wait to see what happens when SG-1 realizes Urgo's around. Did Ethan intend for them not to be able to get back?
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying it. SG-1 is starting to get the idea that maybe one of their old friends is back in the next chapter, but they aren't sure. As far as Ethan not wanting them to be able to get back, I guess you will have to wait and see. The next chapter is up. I hope you like it.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Matchmaking and Binge Eating" from RevDorothyL
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Love it! Buffy may actually get some non-destructive smoochies from Daniel and/or Spike, if Urgo has his way. And Urgo's plan to usurp the chip's function leads to all sorts of intriguing possibilities. If Spike has Urgo talking in his head all the time, will he feel the need to get his soul back? Or will Urgo's very modest sort of grasp on morality (not wanting Spike to become happy through eviscerating Daniel, e.g.) be sufficient to keep Spike himself and yet reasonably safe to play with?
Comments from author:
Not sure how it is going to all end up exactly. I do have a sort of general plan. but one thing I can say if it comes down to having Urgo be stuck in his head for the rest of his immortal un-life I think Spike would fight for his soul if only to be free of him. I hope you like the new chapter.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Geez Xander, Hungry Much?" from RedDeathLV
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Just a friendly tip: Work on your spelling. Especially of names.

The correct name is "Xander" and not "Zander." (near the end)
Another one: You spelled another name as "Frazure" when the correct spelling is "Frasier." (beginning)
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing it out. Another reader had but I hadn't gone back to fix it yet. I have since gotten a beta reader for this fic so hopefully there shouldn't be too many recurrences. I had meant to check Frasiers name before I posted, but didn't get it done. The Zander/Xander thing was purely key entry error when typing. I was tired when I posted this chapter so I didn't catch it when I reread it.

So aside from the spelling and grammar are you enjoying the story?
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [12 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Matchmaking and Binge Eating" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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Ooh, Buffy is SO not going to be happy with Spike when she comes out of her Daniel/Urgo induced haze and realizes what Spike is up to. I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle the Urgo/Spike issue with the chip. :-D

*hunkering down to wait for more goodies*
Comments from author:
Wow, you reviewed even though you are my beta reader! That is just awesome of you! (especially since this one has not been getting as many reviews) Thank you again!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Matchmaking and Binge Eating" from LadyFoxFire
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So when does everyone put two and two together and get Urgo? before or after Giles and Dawn return?
Comments from author:
The next chapter should have some realizations involved. Dawn and Giles will probably not return until the very end. I mentioned before, I think, that I don't think I could write Dawn without making people angry. (She seems like such a little brat to me) I know a lot of people like her but I just don't think I could write her without making people angry.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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