This situation is a complete mess. The good guy (Clark) is turned evil by a ring. The white knight (Xander) is turned psychotic by the accidental bad guy. The borderline guy (Lex) is going to have to deal with finding out that his inspiration to be a good person is capable of horrible deeds (even if it was under the influence), and that his would be hero was abused and damaged by his innocent young friend, Clark. It has the makings of a great soap opera. Will Clark confess his evil deeds? It would be the right thing to do. I'll definitely be tuning in again.
Review By [kayron] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ya know, I'm not sure how'd you got about doing it with everything 'Kal' but Xander thru but for some reason my brain keeps wanting to see you turn this into a Xander/Lex/Clark triad.
OMG! I love this story! I get chills reading it though. When I first found it I thought it was going to be... not so dark and creepy. But it is great. I love Xander!Revenge!
Review By [spanderfan] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
holy crap you are actively trying to drive us insane aren't you.. i'm in love with this story it is intense and pulls you in from the first chapter but so long between updates and then to leave us there .. darn it i'm on the edge of my seat.. lol.. please please more of this soon.. i can't wait to see .. everything.. lex meeting xander meeting clark who is and is not kal.. and if xan will keep the hyena or go back to xan.. sigh so many questions .. see .. insane.. lol.. love love this chapter more soon please
Review By [trenee] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from sabellestarte
Review:
This is wonderful. I hope you decide to continue this. I would like to see Lex and Xander meet up again. And see how Gotham and the Bat infestation fit in.
Review By [sabellestarte] • Date [17 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]