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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from omnimercurial
Review:
Hi. I enjoyed reading this, good job. It is unfortunate that there is only the 1 chapter as this shows a lot of promise. Do you have any other chapters written? you hinted in another review that things would develop in the next chapter but as 06 was when Ch 1 was posted i am unsure if this is a dead fic or not. I hope you do continue this story. I recently posted a Tsukihime challenge myself. ^_^
Review By [omnimercurial] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blend
Review:
Wonderful!

Please keep with this amazing idea!
Review By [Blend] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
It's the start of an interesting story with a darkness appropriate for the Hellmouth -- and Tsukihime. I'm interested in reading more about how Xander copes and curious how this affects his character development.
Comments from author:
Good to see you find this prologue satisfactory. As for the effects of this, well, they are going to b seen next chapter, at least their beginnings.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am not familiar with the cross, but you did a good job of explaining what is going on. I liked the beginning and would like to see more of your story. Please write more.
Comments from author:
Thank you, as I said in the fic I am aware how little know it is (a shame, in my opinion) so, it is good to know that I did an, at least, half competent job at explaining the TYPE-MOON aspect of things.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valkyrie
Review:
Me? I would've made him Archer, or Lancer, from the other Type-Moon I'm aware of: Fate/Stay Night. Isn't Tsukihime an H-game that's super, super rare to find?
Comments from author:
Well, the problem with them is that they are servants, they can't remain in the plane without someone to support them (and I'd rather *not* see a grail war in SunnyD;)) That aside, I do have a reason for the fic.

Now, regarding the Tsukihime bit, well... yes, that is true, but the same goes with fate (as a matter of fact both are in the same universe) but I am basing this off the anime version (that is far more common, I think :P) if you haven't watched it, I recommend it. a bit too serious at time, but not bad at all (hey, I am writing a fic based off it, so it can't be that bad ;))
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [31 Jul 06] • Not Rated
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