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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rivulet
Review:
That was really good. It was sad that Buffy died, but it was good to see Dawn's inner strength in that she takes care of her sister and then goes to help.
Comments from author:
I was hesitant to kill Buffy, but I wanted this story to be about Dawn as Dawn, not Dawn as the Key or Buffy the vampire slayer's little kid sister, you know? Now I just need to get around to finishing up on writing it. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Rivulet] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
This is one of the few Lost crossovers I have read that I think would actually work. After all if you put Buffy/Willow/Faith or somebody with any real power then it just loses some of the 'fear of the unknown' that makes the show work. I hope this one continues as I would love to read more.

Giant monster in the woods? Buffy kills it. The End. Doesn't really make a good episode of Lost.
Comments from author:
Exactly - but at least she has the smarts to *hopefully* not get herself killed.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stemaphie
Review:
Dawn is gonna kill the person who violated her sister. THe people of Flight 851 are gonna know not to piss off a Summer's woman and they are gonna learn that really quickly. GRRRRR!!!! I can't believe you killed Buffy. But excellent start to the story and I can't wait to see where you go from this point. I also cannot wait to see who Buffy's fiance was.
Awaiting the next installment
Stemaphie
Comments from author:
I'm glad to see that I got such a passionate review :) Yes, I killed Buffy, and yes I am truly sorry about that, but I needed to do it to get Dawn's character where I needed her for the fic.

Yes, you can definitely expect a violate reaction when Dawn finds out who took her sister's engagement ring. There was mention of who Buffy's fiancee was - not an outright statement, but his name was mentioned.

Thanks for the review :)
Review By [Stemaphie] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kane
Review:
Hey,

Is Buffy gone for good?
Comments from author:
As far as my muse is concerned, yes, but that island has a strange way of making things appear.
Review By [Kane] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I'm not liking you killing Buffy, but I'm sure it is needed for the plot.

So, can I expect that Sawyer stole the rings?
Comments from author:
Unfortunately Buffy's demise was indeed needed for the plot. As for Sawyer...he does seem to collect everything doesn't he?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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