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Review of chapter "Need to Know" from FireWolfe
Review:
This could so use a sequel.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from FireWolfe
Review:
This really should be expanded it is a great start.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thanks. I did have some ideas about what would come after, but it didn't amount to a whole chapter. Maybe one day inspiration will strike. In the meantime, I hope you noticed it was attached to another story -- a "missing chapter" sorta deal -- that you might enjoy --

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-3474/Jinni+Not+Your+Typical+Military+Wife.htm.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from Suzanne
Review:
That was cute....:)
Review By [Suzanne] • Date [25 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from Keshkreature
Review:
*giggle* Very cute. Poor George!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from ChristaBelle
Review:
Not sure, but I think that TarnishedGold actually wanted a bit more of Willow's explanation, not the phone call. At least, that's what I wanted more of. :) Nevertheless, this was fun. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Ah! Well, that'd be getting into the next (unwritten) chapter,wouldn't it :-) Need a whole nother inspiration for that.

thanks...mark
Review By [ChristaBelle] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from TarnishedGold
Review:
I was rather disappointed to see this conversation missing as well. But where you cut it... geez... there should be just a little more. Keep up the good work.
Gold
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review.

I don't think there was much more to it. I think it would go something like this:

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I didn't know what to say to that, and there was a brief pause in the conversation.

"So, you'll get her in and treat her right, eh, George." It sounded almost like a question, rather than the repetition of an order I knew it to be.

I sighed. "Yes, sir."

"Good man. You won't regret it."

"I've been regretting it ever since I heard of this woman."

"With luck, that'll change. Good luck, George."

"Thank you, sir," I said, as he hung up.
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I like ending on the dramatic line better -- but I can sympathize with the desire to know how it all played out.

...mark young
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Need to Know" from Kneazles
Review:
This was a very good 'missing chapter' it fit in seemlessly. Good job.
Comments from author:
Actually I think Jinni mentions in one of the later chapters that the President called Hammond -- but maybe it could be construed as simply saying that the order came from the President, which my caller implied was the case.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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