>.> Does this count? I mean, isn't the idea of the challenge to... ya know... make them actually stay together and deal with being married? Immedietaly going "Nope, can't work let's go get an annulment" feels like cheating, in a bad way.,
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
So no meeting ,omths/years later and Xander being infected?
Comments from author:
I'm probaably going to go back and rework it so its longer, but I probably won't continue it as I rarely write Xanderfic as I don't think I will be able to do him justice.
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [13 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think that this could have been a really good fic if you had not rushed the story so much and i thought that the ending come a little to quick. It was the first Xander/Cherry fic i'd read.
Sarah
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments. As I have said in an earlier review, after the August ficathon I plan on reworking it.
Thanks. If I do continue it, it will be after I rework the story so its more realistic and less 'flat.' Although if anyone wants to continue it they can.
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
This was a bad story. There was on emotions in it. It felt too clinical.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the honest comments, I wasn't too happy with it myself. The only reason I posted it is I want to try to complete the ficadaython but didn't have time to write another story for yesterday. I plan to rework it when I have time.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated