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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Christy
Review:
Interesting concept, but you need some serious work with a spell checker.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback
Review By [Christy] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
That was thought-provoking ... it makes me wonder exactly how much really *important* stuff got left out of my school lessons.
Comments from author:
You mean like most lessons that you take seem to have no real life application?
Review By [banner] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lin
Review:
this could potentially become interesting, but only if you put forth some creativity. Pretty much all you have right now is a compilation of history that people who have watched buffy and angel have learned.
There are a number of different directions you can take this fic with the introduction you have...please continue.
I hope i have not offended you with this review as it was not ment to be offensive.
Comments from author:
You've not offended me. I've had a major case of writer's block for a while now, and I had attempted to do the TwistedShorts ficathon in an attempt to break the writer's block but it didn't work however comments like your own make me want to write more, if only to rise to the challenge. For now this story will remain as it is, but when I have the time and inclination to continue, the chances are I will expand upon it.
Review By [Lin] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alianna
Review:
This one-shot does give a good lecture on the Vampires... but i would suggest put a twist at the end of the lesson like one of the vamps showing up and knows Remus...or try to make this one shot a more indepth piece with a longer plot to reallt crossover the BtVS and HP universe together...it's well written, that much is certain.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The reason I didn't have one of the vampires show up, was because at this point in canon, Angel would have been helping take care of the Mayor, and well the others are either dead or still evil, and would have been more apt to try to eat Remus or the students than chat.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [4 Aug 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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