this could potentially become interesting, but only if you put forth some creativity. Pretty much all you have right now is a compilation of history that people who have watched buffy and angel have learned. There are a number of different directions you can take this fic with the introduction you have...please continue. I hope i have not offended you with this review as it was not ment to be offensive.
Comments from author:
You've not offended me. I've had a major case of writer's block for a while now, and I had attempted to do the TwistedShorts ficathon in an attempt to break the writer's block but it didn't work however comments like your own make me want to write more, if only to rise to the challenge. For now this story will remain as it is, but when I have the time and inclination to continue, the chances are I will expand upon it.
This one-shot does give a good lecture on the Vampires... but i would suggest put a twist at the end of the lesson like one of the vamps showing up and knows Remus...or try to make this one shot a more indepth piece with a longer plot to reallt crossover the BtVS and HP universe together...it's well written, that much is certain.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The reason I didn't have one of the vampires show up, was because at this point in canon, Angel would have been helping take care of the Mayor, and well the others are either dead or still evil, and would have been more apt to try to eat Remus or the students than chat.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [4 Aug 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
