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Review of chapter "What the...?" from TDWidow
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Don't Jacen and Jaina already have a connection like that due to their Force development in the womb?
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Letter: Making a change" from CedarPineSpruce
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I hope I do see your original work someday. All the best to you and your family. :-) *hugs*
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Actually, the blog listed in my author's profile contains writing updates along with all the other things for anyone who is interested.
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Musings" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Excellent story.

Please, can you have C3PO use his story telling / sound effect skills? It's one of the few points he really shines in the movie.
Comments from author:
Hmm...That's a good idea. I'll see what I can do.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaching an Understanding." from Dawnlight
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I absolutely love this story. Please update it soon, I cannot wait to read what happens.
Review By [Dawnlight] • Date [20 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaching an Understanding." from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Really enjoying this story. A bit different and enjoyable.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaching an Understanding." from RevDorothyL
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Though I'm not as thoroughly up to date on the "Star Wars" books as I used to be (I think the last ones I read were Barbara Hambly's CHILDREN OF THE JEDI and PLANET OF TWILIGHT, and I'm not even exactly sure about those titles), and my memories of the old animated "X-Men" series have tended to get overlayed by the films, I'm really enjoying this.

With every chapter, my memories of the old series are coming back (Rogue's a grownup, Logan's gruffer and shorter but still the most fascinating guy ever, Xavier doesn't sound so much like Patrick Stewart, etc.), and I'm recalling how much I enjoyed the continuing story arcs and the stand-alone episodes (like the classic one introducing Nightcrawler and addressing Logan's search for faith).

I hope you'll be able to continue to update this, whenever your schedule permits.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What the...?" from SaiyaSith
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Interesting, very interesting. I really enjoy this story. I'm glad to see Jaina out on her own from underneath everyone's shadow. Good job!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night out" from SaiyaSith
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Most excellent! I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up! :-)
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night out" from kcjadesolo
Review:
cool. i love this story. can't wait for the next chapter. hey are we going to see anyone else from Star Wars?
Comments from author:
Actually, I'm not sure yet. I'm planning on referencing other Star Wars characters, maybe having Jaina visit them through the Force "I, Jedi" style, but I'm not sure if I'll actually bring other characters directly into the story.

I have a bad habit of starting fan fics before I think the plot all the way through...Actually, I do that with original stuff too....You know, this could be why I spend so much time on rewrites. *wonders off to contemplate changing writing styles*
Review By [kcjadesolo] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night out" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Like your characterizations of everyone... right on target...

Nitpick: Coruscant not Choruscant
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment and spelling correction. I like doing fan fiction as a way to work on dealing with new types of characters or situations. It's good to know I'm pulling it off somewhat. And, I've had trouble finding my source books. Star Wars spellings are always a little tricky otherwise.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting Started" from cflat
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Interesting crossover. I've never read an X-Men/Star Wars crossover before. Can't wait for the next update.
Review By [cflat] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting Started" from SaiyaSith
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Most excellent! Love the crossover, love this story! Your writing is very well done, no obvious spelling or grammar problems. Good editing too. Keep up the great work!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Started" from grd
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Maybe Xaviar could suggest some of the mutants to help her next time she works on the ship. ie. Colossus for lifting.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breakfast with the Others" from cwolf
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Lebeau (as indicated when trying to deliberately misspell the name in google search) not Luboe. other than that, good story.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breakfast with the Others" from Dawnlight
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Another wonderful chapter!! I cannot wait for the next. Will Jania feel/react to Jacen's capture by the Vong through their twin bond? The questions are just swirling through my mind. Please update soon and help answer some of the questions that are flying about with the various directions in which you can take the plot. Update soon!!! ;)
Review By [Dawnlight] • Date [22 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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