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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
Review:
Nice story. Good job with the video. Of course, probably the biggest thing you did right was in writing a oneshot that's both entertaining when you read it, and actually feels complete when you reach the end.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHawke
Review:
touching story. the video tape was humorous while the letter to xander at the very end was a nice touch. it was a good story, even though it wasn't "action-packed" and only one chapter long so far.
Review By [KingHawke] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TonyTheJew
Review:
Great one shot, hope you do more with it.
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will write more chapters for this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolf
Review:
I hope for more to this story.
Review By [Wolf] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Interesting work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Good for Faith.
The mayor was a fun character.
Nice work.
Review By [LFW] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Baladen
Review:
When I read the clothes thing, I assumed it was Cordelia who figured Faith didn't need the clothes anymore and ransacked the apartment before leaving for LA.

The 10 years later part also confused me, the note at the beginning of the story seemed to indicate Faith didn't wake up until after season 5 when Glory died, then when you skipped ahead ten years, you started describing season 5 events as happening in the previous year (9 years after the earlier part of the story) ... "This year was simply taking the cake; it had started out badly with the group learning that Dawn wasn’t real which had proven quite a little shock." ... Perhaps you should edit the note to indicate that this story is AU after Faith wakes up, not after Glory dies; also clarify the transition paragraphs from the first part of the story to the future part of the story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Baladen] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I always felt the Mayor really did love Faith, in his evil way of course. And his whole, "You won't make it on your own so go steal Buffy's life" tape in the series never struck me as true to his character. I like your version of the tape much better. I was bothered by Buffy's and Willow's stealing and defacing Faith's clothes, but it didn't necessarily have to have been them who did the damage. For instance, I could see Harmony doing it with an evil, but stupid, smile. Lol! I look forward to seeing where you take your Faith's life.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
"Los Angelus" ?

I know he has a big ego, but I didn't realize Wolfram & Hart had enough clout to get them to rename the city!
Comments from author:
That is an accident. I misspelt the name of the city. It seems when I added Angelus to my spellcheck to avoid having to hit ignore everytime it found his name it also prevented it from telling me that I was misspeling LA all the time.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pnrocco
Review:
Good story! If youcan i would like some more, please.
Review By [pnrocco] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I just can't see Buffy and Willow going through Faith's wardrobe stealing and defacing her clothes, they have too much class for that.

it seems a bit fairy tale to get left that much money as well. I would have settled for a hunting cabin in the Colarado rockies and one million dollars as being more realistic.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Great start! Love to see more of this.
Review By [Bill] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GotWolfy
Review:
Loved it great fic!
Review By [GotWolfy] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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