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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon

Review:

Many others may say it (or not) but I don't think they mean it like Dawn does!

Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)

Review:

That's was fun. And here in London, we've always called field trips field trips - I'm not aware of any other word for them. Mind you, I've never ever actually heard anyone use the word "bint" in real life.

Comments from author:

Thanks for the review. I've gone back and edited a bit. I clarified that field trip is new to Draco not because he is British but because he's a wizard and never been on one before. And I took out the whole bint thing. Apparently I spend too much time listening to Spike's form of British!

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jrabbit] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)

Kiwikatipo

Review:

Funny but field trip sounds a bit American why not look up an online dictionary and find modern Britsh slang that Draco would use eg instead of bint, beast meaning ugly girl or slag meaning a girl who sleeps around.

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Kiwikatipo] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated

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