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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
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wonderful.
Review By [spring] • Date [17 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rivulet
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Nice short. Very in char Oz and their eagerness for the infor they wanted was palliable.
Review By [Rivulet] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Duskie
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cute
Review By [Duskie] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Keshkreature
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Hehe, very cute. =) Seems like there should be more though...
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Allyndra
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Yay! Thanks for writing this in response to my prompts! First of all, I love the title. It's one of those whose meaning isn't immediately apparent, but which makes perfect sense by the end of the story. Second, I loved this line: "Oz nodded silently, his face a study of disbelief to someone with practice at reading Teal’c expressions." Very funny! And third, I enjoyed the ambiguity of 'Goddess touched' and why Oz would fit the bill. The moon is often conceived of as a goddess, which ties into his werewolf-iness (which is my preferred explanation). The Earth is also seen as a goddess, which could work with his grounding and mediatation. On the whole, I enjoyed it. Thanks.
Review By [Allyndra] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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That's kinda cool, who is the military guy who is "touched"? Another crossover?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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A very promising start, but this just screams (to me, anyway) "first chapter of a longer and very intriguing tale!" If you find yourself inspired to continue it, I'd be eager to see what happens next. Meanwhile, good work on what you have here, so far.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LMiC
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I like the story. I wouldn't quite qualify it as humorous based on the small amount of story that is here. It kind of begs for more to reach that goal. But as a chance meeting of two worlds that doesn't feel completely contrived it works.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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